Hello,mynameisMinWen,Icomefromthirdjuniorhighschool,myhobbyisreading,extractssomegoodwordsandmakingfriends,Iamacheerfulgirl,Ihopeinthisclasscanknowmorefriends.Inthisperiodoffivedaysofmilitarytraining,Ilearneda

　　Hello,mynameisMinWen,Icomefromthirdjuniorhighschool,myhobbyisreading,extractssomegoodwordsandmakingfriends,Iamacheerfulgirl,Ihopeinthisclasscanknowmorefriends.

　　Inthisperiodoffivedaysofmilitarytraining,Ilearnedalotofthings.Firstofall,wejusttothenewmilitarytrainingupschoolthatblunderingmood,sothatwecanthestaticunderhearttolearn.Then,letmeexperienceamilitarytraininghard,butalsoletmerealizethateventhoughthefutureiswhatsetbacks,lessthanhalfofthem,soshouldstrivetosurvive.Finally,thefriendshipisandinstructors.WhatimpressedmemostistheinstructorsandstaffHaninstructorsseason.Quaternarystafffunnythatweinthemilitarytraininggetsalotoffun.KoreainstructorsstrictisIlearnedthemostbasicsense,bestrictwithoneself.Whentheyleavealotofclassmateswascrying.Koreainstructorsaid:"wejustinyourlifesometraveler,youmusthavethecouragetofirmlygoahead."

　　Ibelieve,myfuturewillbefearlessagainstwaves,towardthedreamwalk.

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