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  MyfavoritesportstarMyfavoritesportstarisaprofessionaltennisplayerandaRussianyoungwoman.Sheisprettywithbeautifulsmileandbig,browneyes.Sheisverytallandthin.Sheisperfectinmanyways.Manypeoplecalledher“Renaissance

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  MyfavoritesportstarisaprofessionaltennisplayerandaRussianyoungwoman.Sheisprettywithbeautifulsmileandbig,browneyes.Sheisverytallandthin.Sheisperfectinmanyways.Manypeoplecalledher“RenaissanceWoman”.Now,canyouguesswhoisshe?Yes,sheisMaria•Sharapova.Today,Iwillintroducesomethingwithher.

  Herchildhood

  MariaSharapovawasbornon19April1987inasmallBlackSearsporttownofSochi.Whenshewas4yearsold,shemetwithaveryfamoustenniscoach,Formthatmoment,Mariastartedhittingtennisballs.Twoyearslater,atennischampionsawtheSharapova.Shetakessharapovatotheworld—famoustennisacademyinFlorida,America.hertenniscareerissosuccessfully

  Heraccomplishment

  In2004,SharapovastunnedWimbledonaudienceswhenshebeatchampionplayerSerenaWilliams.ShebeamedthefirstRussiantowinaWimbledonwomen’ssingletitle.Andin2005,sheisWorldNo.1.Attheendof2006,shewastheworld'shighest-paidfemaleathlete.Butin2007,shewaspuzzledbyillness,isveryterribletoher.However,sheneverdiscourages,shealwaysbebyvirtueoftheirstrongwillandoptimisticattitude,hercharmingsmilealwaysonherface.In2008,shewonAustralianOpen.SharapovahaswonthreeGrandSlamsinglestitlesand21WTAsinglestitle.

  Afterwork

  Afterwork,Sharapovahasmanyinterests.Example:reading,visitingmuseums,painting,andlearningnewlanguages.Sharapovaisafashionwoman.Shejoinslotsoffashionshow.Sheisalsoagoodmodel.Manyactivitieshasnotdisturbedherownjob,becausetennisisherfavoritejob,theWorldNo.1isimportanttoher.

  ThisisMaria•Sharapova.Despitemanydifficulties.Butsheisalwayspositiveandoptimistic.Inanycase,shealwayssmilestootherpeople.

  请版我看看这篇文章有什么语法错误!

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2019-04-24 15:12
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刘圣军

  第一行的第二个"a"去掉,表一身兼二职的第二个不用冠词.

  第二行"ways"改成"fields"表示领域.

  第三行"called"改成"call"表示一般情况,不用过去时.

  第三行"whoisshe"改成"whosheis"

  第四行"with"改成"about"

  第七行"Form"改成"From"

  第八行"hitting"改成"playing""takes"-----"took"

  下一行"her"---"Her"下一行"successfully"---"successful"

  下3行"+theworldno.1"

  下一行"puzzledby"---"diagonsewith""to"---"for"

  下2行"+theaustrialianopen"

  下一行"singles"---"single"下一行"title"---"titles"

  下3行"show"---"shows"

  下2行"to"---"for"

  简单改了一下,仅供参考,加油~

2019-04-24 15:16:44

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