初三英语作文,帮忙修改一下关于节约用水的,帮我看看哪里有错误哪里不通顺,提提意见Canyouimaginelifewithoutwater?Canyouimaginethatyoucan'twashclothes,cleanthefloor,cookandevendrinkoneday?Ifyouthin

　　初三英语作文,帮忙修改一下

　　关于节约用水的,帮我看看哪里有错误哪里不通顺,提提意见

　　Canyouimaginelifewithoutwater?Canyouimaginethatyoucan'twashclothes,cleanthefloor,cookandevendrinkoneday?Ifyouthinkthewaterontheearthwon'tbeusedup?Maybeyounevernoticedthatthewaterontheearthislessthanbefore.Andthewaterinthemanyplaceshasn'tbeendrinkbecauseitwasn'tsafeforus.So,wemustsavethewatereveryminute.

　　Buthowcanwesavethewaterininlife?Ithinkwecanusethewaterhasbeenwashricetowashvegetablesrice.Wecanusethecleanwatertowashclothes,andusethedirtywatertorushtotoilet.Itcansavemuchwaterifeveryonedoesthat.Andhaveyouhaveanyadveceaboutsavingwater?

　　Ibelievethatourlifeswon'tbewithoutwaterifeveryonesaveswater!