【那位英语可以的改下错啊.短文改错题类Thejourneywaslongandtired.WeleftLondonatfiveandspenthourstotravelingonthetrain.Wehadtraveledforthreehoursaftersomeoneappearedsellingdrinks.Itwasdarkallthetimewhenw】

　　那位英语可以的改下错啊.短文改错题类

　　Thejourneywaslongandtired.WeleftLondonatfiveandspenthourstotravelingonthetrain.Wehadtraveledforthreehoursaftersomeoneappearedsellingdrinks.ItwasdarkallthetimewhenwearecrossingWales,sowecouldseenothinginthewindow.Whenwefinallyarrived,nearlyeveryoneweresleeping.Assoonasthetrainstopped,everybodycametothelife,talkingtheirbagsorrushingontotheplatform.WhileweweregettingoffthetrainitwasanannouncementthatthetrainhavenotarrivedyetfromIrelandandtherehadbeenadelay.