小弟初学英语特别是作文不太好请各位大虾帮我改改作文以后小弟一个礼拜这时候写一篇,主要帮我改改语法3Q这是一篇日记写的是生日MARCH5thFRIDAYSundayTodayismybirthdayandalsoitisthedayin

　　小弟初学英语特别是作文不太好请各位大虾帮我改改作文以后小弟一个礼拜这时候写一篇,主要帮我改改语法3Q

　　这是一篇日记写的是生日

　　MARCH5thFRIDAYSunday

　　TodayismybirthdayandalsoitisthedayinhonourofLeiFengwhoisoneofthemostfriendlymanintheworld,soImademydecisiontostudyhiminthisspecialday

　　AtfirstImadethebreakfastformyparents.theyaresatisfiedwithmycookskill.Centanily,thebreakfastareverydelicious,secondlyIrepairthedesksandchairswhichareinmyclassroomitissohardtomeandItriedrepairingthemoverandoveragainFinallyIsucceed.LastlyIwenttothehomefortheagedandsharedmybirthdaywiththeold.

　　ThisisthemostinstructivebirthdayIhaveeverhad.Iwillneverforgettoday!

　　主要帮我改改语法还有满分15帮我打个分吧~