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  请英语高手帮我点评我的这篇英语四级作文,1:许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会2:但有些人提出取消春节晚会3:我的看法WhenaskedaboutspringfestivalgalaonCCTV,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinio

  请英语高手帮我点评我的这篇英语四级作文,

  1:许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会

  2:但有些人提出取消春节晚会

  3:我的看法

  WhenaskedaboutspringfestivalgalaonCCTV,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions.Somepeoplethinkthattheprogramsinspringfestivalgalaareverywonderfulandtheyliketowatch.Inaddition,italreadybecomeaexpectationwhencelebratingspringfestival.

  However,therearestillmanypeoplewhodonotagree.Theyholdthatweshouldcanceltheconductofspringfestivalgalabecauseweholdalarge-scaleeveningpartywillspendmuchmoneyandconsumealargenumberofmanpower.Buttherearestillmanypoorpeopleinourcountryandtheyalsohaven'tfoodormoneytocelebratethefestival.

  Personally,Iamonthesideoftheformerargument.Foronething,astous,springfestivalisthemostimportantfestival,itmeansthattheoldyearpassedandthenewyearwillcome,soweshouldholdsomewonderfulgalatocelebrateandtowelcomethenewyear.Foranother,therearemanyChineselivingabroad.Andifweholdagalacanmakethemhappyinspringfestivalandcanspreadourculturetoforeigners.

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  要怎么点评?帮你找错吧.1.春节是要大写的,theSpringFestival,前面有个小写的the.2.ithasalreadybecome.(第三行)3.becauseweholdalarge-scaleeveningpartywillspendmuchmoneyandconsumealargen...

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