求高手帮忙批改一篇CET-4的作文.提示1.目前越来越多的人选择自驾游的方式旅行2自驾游的利与弊3我的观点Onself-drivingTourNowadays,thereisagrowingconcernovertheissuethatmoreandmorepeoplegotravelons

　　求高手帮忙批改一篇CET-4的作文.

　　提示

　　1.目前越来越多的人选择自驾游的方式旅行

　　2自驾游的利与弊

　　3我的观点

　　Onself-drivingTour

　　Nowadays,thereisagrowingconcernovertheissuethatmoreandmorepeoplegotravelonselfdriving,foritmaywellcome

　　asasurprisetolearnbetweentheadvantageanddisadvantage.

　　Somepeoplethinkthatself-drivingisdangerous,butinmyopinion,self-drivingisconvenient.

　　WhydoIholdthisidea.Thereareavarietyoffactorswhichcanaccountfor

　　it.ThemostimportantreasonisthatIcandrivetowhateverIwantinholidays.

　　AnothermajoyfactoristhatIneedn’ttocatchupwiththeschedule.Themost

　　frequentlystressedoneisthatwehaveaprivatezoneinourcar.

　　Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayfinallydrawaconclusionthatdueattention

　　shouldbegiventotheself-drivingtour,soastomakeourlifemorecolorful.

　　这篇作文如果满分是15分的话,可以得到多少分,还有就是有没有一些改进的意见,我需要意见.

　　我这只是套了一个模版，这种作文可以得多少分？