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  【请英语高手帮我点评我的这篇英语四级作文(语法、用词或者其他)万分感谢RecreationalActivitiesNowadays,differentkindsofrecreationalactivitiesaroundourlife.Forexample,watchingTV,singing,dancing,playingchess,】

  请英语高手帮我点评我的这篇英语四级作文(语法、用词或者其他)万分感谢

  RecreationalActivities

  Nowadays,differentkindsofrecreationalactivitiesaroundourlife.Forexample,watchingTV,singing,dancing,playingchess,traveling,surfingontheInternetandsoon.

  Therearemanyrecreationalactivitiesinourlifeanditcanmakeussohappy.Peoplewhoalwaysinworkcantakepartinrecreationalactivitiestorelaxtheirselfandpeoplewhostayathomeallalongcantakepartinittoenrichtheirlife.Buteverycoinhastwosides,recreationalactivitiesisnoexceptionandinanotherword,itstillhasnegativeaspects.Tobeginwith,thestudentswhotakepartinmanyrecreationalactivitiesmayeffecttheirstudy.Andinaddition,manypeoplecan'tlimitthetimesinplayanditwillreducethetimesofrest.

  Formypart,weshouldn'twork、studyorstayathomealltheway,wemusttakepartinrecreationalactivitiestomakeourbodyrelax,forexample,wecaninviteourfriendstotravelonweekend,Ithinkitisveryinteresting.Buteverythingshouldn'tdoexcessively,wemuststudytolimittheplaytimes.Inaword,weshouldadmittheadvantagesofrecreationalactivitiesandalsoacceptthedisadvantages.

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2019-04-29 04:21
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黄钲东

  我就不分析内容,帮你看看语法错误吧.第一句differentkindsofrecreationalactivitiesaroundourlife没有动词啊.汗.印象分倍减.Therearemanyrecreationalactivitiesinourlifeanditcanmakeussohap...

2019-04-29 04:23:14

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