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  求高手帮我修改这篇英语作文(CET4)顺便打一下分数1、各大学开设了各种各样的选修课2、学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课3、以你自己为例……WhatElectivestoChooseNowadays,therearevari

  求高手帮我修改这篇英语作文(CET4)顺便打一下分数

  1、各大学开设了各种各样的选修课

  2、学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课

  3、以你自己为例……

  WhatElectivestoChoose

  Nowadays,therearevariouselectivesin

  colleaguesanduniversitiesthatstudentscouldchoosenotonlyassociatewhit

  theirprofessionalbutalsotheirinterestin.

  Reasonsfordifferentoptions,ofcourse,

  areinabundance.Somestudentstendtochoosethecoursesforprofessional

  requirement,theysupportprofessionalknowledgeenhance.Otherspayattention

  toindividualinterest,theyharbortheidealearningisinordertoexpandinghorizons.

  Frommyownperspective,theidealisthe

  twoelementscombinedtogether.ButwhenIhavetomakeadecision,Iwould

  pickupthebestchoosetomyinterestandprofessionalrequirement.Onlyinthiswaycanweenjoyaenrichcampuslife.

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  大概改了一下,原文写的不错,意思很到位,分数不会低.

  WhatElectivestoChoose

  Nowadays,therearevariouselectivesin

  colleaguesanduniversitiesthatstudentscouldchoosenotonlyassociatewhit

  theirprofessionalbutalsotheirinterestin.

  这里修改professions和interests

  Reasonsfordifferentoptions,ofcourse,

  areinabundance.Somestudentstendtochoosethecoursesforprofessional

  forprofessional改成forjob

  requirement,theysupportprofessionalknowledgeenhance.Otherspayattention

  theysupport改成Thesecourseswouldenhancetheirknowledge.

  toindividualinterest,theyharbortheidealearningisinordertoexpandinghorizons.

  theyharbor改成theideaistoexpandtheirvisionsinparticularfields.

  Frommyownperspective,theidealisthe

  twoelementscombinedtogether.ButwhenIhavetomakeadecision,Iwould

  pickupthebestchoosetomyinterestandprofessionalrequirement.Onlyinthiswaycanwe

  Iwould改成Iwouldpickthemostsuitablecoursestofitintomyinterestandjobrequirement.

  enjoyaenrichcampuslife.

2019-04-29 05:41:46

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