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  【英语四级作文,帮我看看哪里错的和要改进的呗(我英语不咋地),嘻嘻……WhatElectivestoChooseThecollegeisthemostimportantstationinourlife!Inthecollege,weneedtouseallkindsofknowledgetoenrichus!So,cho】

  英语四级作文,帮我看看哪里错的和要改进的呗(我英语不咋地),嘻嘻……

  WhatElectivestoChoose

  Thecollegeisthemostimportantstationinourlife!Inthecollege,weneedtouseallkindsofknowledgetoenrichus!So,choosesomesuitableelectivesforusisanimpantantwaytogetknowledge!

  Facetoallkindsofelectives,everyonehavetheirownthinkingandchoice.Somepeoplelikedrawing,theychooseart.Somepeoplelikesports,theychoosePE.Evensomepeopleelsechoosealessonjustthattheywanttorelax!

  Inmyopinion,whatelectivestochoosedependonourhabitandwhatyouwanttoknowmore!Wehavetoknowthatwecanimproveusontheonehandbyhabits!Asfarasiamconcerned,ilikecomputersoichoosecomputerscienceandiamreallystudyitwell.

  Allinall,wehavepatattentiontowhatkindofelectivestochoose,inordertomakeusbetter!

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2019-04-29 06:10
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李允旺

  choosesomesuitableelectivesforusisanimpantantwaytogetknowledge!

  头重脚轻了,应该改成It'sanimportantwaytochoosesomesuitableelectivesforustogetknowledge!

  Faceto改成facing.

  thinking改成thought.

  justthattheywanttorelax!把that改成for或者as.

  wehavepat改成wehavetopay

  makeusbetter改成us后面加一个动词,可以是become等等.

  敝人能力有限,希望能帮到你一些.

2019-04-29 06:14:29
裴晓芳

  帮助很多了!!不过我想知道thinking改为thought是语法的哪个方面,好补一补,谢谢啦

2019-04-29 06:17:35

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