请英语高手帮我点评一下我的这篇英语四级作文,不甚感激.1：各大学开设了各种各样的选修课2：学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课3：以你自己为例.Whatelectivestochoose?Nowdifferentkindsofe

　　请英语高手帮我点评一下我的这篇英语四级作文,不甚感激.

　　1：各大学开设了各种各样的选修课

　　2：学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课

　　3：以你自己为例.

　　Whatelectivestochoose?

　　Nowdifferentkindsofelectivesareopenedtothecollegestudentsinmanyuniversity.Theysaytheelectiveswillexpandthestudents'viewandenrichtheirlife.

　　Differentstudentshavedifferentchoice.Somestudentsselectaclassoftaijiquan.Theythinkthattaijiquanisourtraditionalcreamandithavemagicpowertoattracttheytochoose.Inaddition,learningtaijiquanwillmaketheirhealthbetter.Andotherstudentslikeaclassofenvironmentinourlife.Theyholdthatenvironmentinourworldisgettingmoreandmoreworseandweshouldlearnsomethingtoprotectit.Moreover,todaymanystoresarearoundtheirschoolalwaysusegreatmanyofplasticbagsandboxes.

　　Formypart,IlikethecultureofChaoshan,soIselectaclassofChaoju.Theteacherinourclassisveryinterestingandhumor.Hisclassisrelaxed.Importantly,IcanlearnsomethingaboutthedevelopmentofChaojuandaskillofplay.Insum,itisagoodchoiceforme.