【请英语高手帮我点评我的这篇英语四级作文,1：中国城乡之间的差距似乎有增大的趋势2：导致这种现象的原因3：怎样才能缩小城乡之间的差距BridgingtheGapbetweentheUrbanandRuralAreasWiththedeve】

　　请英语高手帮我点评我的这篇英语四级作文,

　　1：中国城乡之间的差距似乎有增大的趋势

　　2：导致这种现象的原因

　　3：怎样才能缩小城乡之间的差距

　　BridgingtheGapbetweentheUrbanandRuralAreas

　　Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,thegapbetwwentheurbanandruralareasseemsincreased.Theurbanareasdevelopingbetterandbetter,theruralareasgetingandgetingworseandworse.

　　Ithinktherearetworeasonsleadtothisgap.Foronething,theculturalandeducationalworkisnotdevelopwell,somanyruralpeoplehavenotagoodeducationalleveltohelptheirhometowntodevelop.Foranotherthing,manyruralyoungergoestotheurbanareasaredevelopwellandtherearenotmanytalentedstayinginruralareas.

　　Weshouldtakesomemesurestobridgethegapbetweentheurbanandruralareas.Firstly,theruralgovernmentsshoulddevotemajoreffortstoeducationalwork.Secondly,thecountrygovernmentsshouldofferalargenumberofmoneytohelpthoseruralareastodevelop.Lastly,theruralpeopleshouldstayintheirhometowntohelptheirhometowntodevelop.