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  【请英语高手们帮我点评一下我的这篇英语四级作文(语法、用词或者其他)万分感谢1:一次性塑料袋曾被广泛使用2:使用一次性塑料袋带来的问题3:限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义Limitingthe】

  请英语高手们帮我点评一下我的这篇英语四级作文(语法、用词或者其他)万分感谢

  1:一次性塑料袋曾被广泛使用

  2:使用一次性塑料袋带来的问题

  3:限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义

  LimitingtheUseofDisposablePlasticBags

  Inthepastyears,thedisposableplasticbagswasusedtopersonextensively,especiallypeoplewhobuyinginsupermarket.Therearemanyproblemswithdisposableplasticbagswasthrownawayeverywhere,anditwillcausetheWhitePollution.Andsecondly,plasticbagsarenoteasytodecompose,soitwillleaveinourlandalongtimeandpolluteourgroundwater.Lastly,somepeoplealwayschoosetoburnthedisposableplasticbagswhenitismany.

  Astheplasticbagstakesmoreandmoreproblems,ourgovernmentmakealawtolimittheuseofdisposableplasticbags.Formypart,Ithinktheactioncantakemanybenefitstoperson.Tobeginwith,itwillreducetheproductofdisposableplasticbagsandasthepriceincreased,peoplewillcontroltheirdesireofuseit.Inaddition,itcanprotectourenvironmentbetterandensureourhealth.Inaword,itisabeneficialthingthatitcanmakeourlifebetter.

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  Inthepastyears,thedisposableplasticbagswere(was)usedbypeople(toperson)extensively,especiallythose(people)whobuy(ing)thingsin

  supermarket.Therearemanyproblemswithdisposableplasticbagsbeing(was)

  thrownawayeverywhere,(anditwillcause)thuscausingtheWhitePollution

  .Andsecondly,plasticbagsarenoteasytodecompose,sothey(it)willremain(leave)inourlandalongtimeandpolluteourgroundwater.Lastly

  ,somepeoplealwayschoosetoburnthedisposableplasticbagswhentheyhavetoo(itis)many(1).

  Astheplasticbagscreated(takes)moreandmoreproblems,ourgovernment

  made(make)alawtolimittheuseofdisposableplasticbags(2).Asfaras

  Iamconcerned(Formypart),Ithinktheactioncanbring(take)manybenefits

  topeople(person).Tobeginwith,itwillreducetheproduction(product)

  ofdisposableplasticbagsandasthepriceincreases(increased),people

  willcontroltheirdesireofusingthem(useit).Inaddition,itcanprotect

  betterbothourenvironment(better)and(ensure)ourhealth.Inshort(aword),itisabeneficialthingthatitcanmakeourlifebetter.

  (1)或whentherearetoomany.

  (2)时态不清楚,政府通过法例了吗?还是计划这样做?

  如果还未能

  Astheplasticbagshavecreatedmoreandmoreproblems,ourgovernment

  willpassalawtolimittheuseofdisposableplasticbags.

2019-04-29 11:31:48

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