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  请英语高手帮我点评一下我的四级英语作文(语法、用词)万分感谢1:越来越多的人使用信用卡,信用卡有哪些好处?2:信用卡的弊端3:你自己的观点CreditCardsNowadays,moreandmorepeopleusecredit

  请英语高手帮我点评一下我的四级英语作文(语法、用词)万分感谢

  1:越来越多的人使用信用卡,信用卡有哪些好处?

  2:信用卡的弊端

  3:你自己的观点

  CreditCards

  Nowadays,moreandmorepeopleusecreditcardsinsteadofcarryingalargeofmoney.Infact,therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesinusingcreditcards.Generallyspeaking,it'swidelybelievedthereareseveralpositiveaspectsasfollows.Firstly,thepeopleusecreditcardwithoutalargeofmoney,it'sveryconvenientandsafe.Andsecondly,moreandmorecustomersusecreditcardscanreduceamountofworktotheworkerswhoworkinasupermarketorarestaurant.

  Justasapopularsayinggoes,"everycoinshastwosides",usingcreditcardsisnoexception,andinanotherword,itstillhasnegativeaspects.Tobeginwith,ifyouloseyourcard,itputyoutotroubleandyoumustgotothebanktoapplyforanewcard.Inaddition,manythievesmakeuseofittocheatthepeople,andmanypeoplelosemuchmoney.

  Formypart,Ithinkweshouldtrytobringtheadvantagesofusingcreditcardsintofullplay,andreducethedisadvantagestotheminimumatthesametime.

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2019-04-29 14:39
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  Nowadays,moreandmorepeopleusecreditcardsinsteadofcarryingalargeAMOUNTOFCASH,没有说alargeofmoney的,后面也有Firstly,thepeopleusecreditcardwithoutalargeofmoney,不过这句意思上也有点怪我猜你是说拿了信用卡就不用带大量现金了首先people前不用the,whenpeopleusecreditcardsinsteadofcash,it'smoreconvenientandsafe,然后...moreandmorecustomersusecreditcardscanreduce...有问题,using吧,...FORtheworkers

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