【请英语高手帮我点评一下我的四级作文（语法、用词)1,中国有很多学生无法用英语进行交流,由此出现“哑巴英语”现象2,造成“哑巴英语”原因3,提供一些可行的解决方法"MuteEnglish"amongChine】

　　请英语高手帮我点评一下我的四级作文（语法、用词)

　　1,中国有很多学生无法用英语进行交流,由此出现“哑巴英语”现象

　　2,造成“哑巴英语”原因

　　3,提供一些可行的解决方法

　　"MuteEnglish"amongChinesestudents

　　Aphenomononof"MuteEnglish"appearsamongchinesestudentsbecausetheycan'tuseEnglishtotalkwiththeirclassmates,friendsandforeigners.

　　Therearetworeasonsforthissituation.First,mostofChinesestudentsstudysEnglishfortheirexamination,theypaymoreattentiontowrittentestandneglectofspokenlanguage.ItisafailtoChineseeducation.Second,manyChinesestudentsaresoshyandunconfidentinEnglishclass,theyalwayslisteningcarefully,butnotputuptheirhandstoanswerteacher'squestions.

　　IftheChinesestudentssolvethisproblem,asIseeit,theymustcoverthefollowingpoints:first,don'tstudyhardforexamiation,butthekonwledge;second,theyshouldpayattentiontospokenlanuage;last,iftheymeettheforeignerinsupermarketorrestaurant,theyshouldtalkwiththeporeignpeopleboldly.

　　Inaword,learningEnglishoranotherforeignlanuageisainteresting,notaburden,weshouldn'tstudyonlyforexamination.

　　里面有八个词语,由于打字打的快,出现了错误,请见谅.