英文简历修改·Experience2007/07--2007/08：ShanghaijiayangS&Tcompany|TeleSalesHeavyMachinenary|CompanySize:20-99|1000-2000RMB/MonthContactourclientsandcallthembyphoneorface-to-face,meanwhile,introduceourproductstothe

　　英文简历修改

　　·Experience

　　2007/07--2007/08：ShanghaijiayangS&Tcompany|TeleSales

　　HeavyMachinenary|CompanySize:20-99|1000-2000RMB/Month

　　Contactourclientsandcallthembyphoneorface-to-face,meanwhile,introduceourproductstothemandkeepthisralationshipnomattertheybookorderornot.

　　·EnglishandComputerAbilities

　　HaveagoodcommandofbothspokenandwrittenEnglish.PassedCET-4,CET-6,BEC(v).IntermediateInterpretation

　　Familiarwithcomputerskills,suchasWord,Excel,PowerPointandsoon.

　　·Extra-curriculumActivities

　　Organizeseveralactivitiesofthecollege,suchaswelcomeparties,climbingmountains,etc.Takepartintheactivitiesinthecampusactively.Takepart-timejobsafterstudy,takefamilyteacherandmarketinvestigatorforexample.Paycloseattentiontopublicwelfareestablishment,likecharitysale,contributionandsoon.

　　·Character

　　Asapersonwhoispassionate,openandclear,hardworking,discreetasIam,efficientteamworkiswhatIamgoodataswell.

　　Ihopeyouwouldliketogivemeanopportunitytoexpressmyselfinyourcorporation.

　　Thankyou!

　　麻烦帮我看看里面的语法错误，以及动词的用法哪里需要分词结构等等