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  helpme!请高手看看有没有语法错误!Goodmorning,mynameisyuying,Itisreallyagreathonortohavethisopportunitytointroducemyself,Ihopeicanmakeagoodperformancetoday.Nowiwillintroducemyself,Iam24yearsold,borninHar

  helpme!请高手看看有没有语法错误!

  Goodmorning,mynameisyuying,Itisreallyagreathonortohavethisopportunitytointroducemyself,Ihopeicanmakeagoodperformancetoday.Nowiwillintroducemyself,Iam24yearsold,borninHarbinCity.IgraduatedfromHarbinUniversityofCommerce.

  MymajorisAccounting.Andigotmybachelordegreeaftermygraduationintheyearof2011.Ispendmostofmytimeonstudy,IhavepassedCET4.Andihaveacquiredbasicknowledgeofmymajorduringmyschooltime.InJuly2011,IbeganworkforaprivatecompanyasaAccountinginHaerbincity.

  IhaveadreamsinceIwasachild.IdreamthatonedayIcanflyintheblueskylikethebird.NowIhavethechancetomakeitcometrue.Ificantakethisjob.I’lltrymybesttodoeverythingwell.Because.Ilovethisjob.

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2019-04-29 22:07
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  没有语法问题,但是这文章写的.太生硬,太简单了.我给你改改Goodmorning,mynameisYuYing,Iappreciatetheopportunitytomakeaself-introduction,IwishIcouldhaveagreatperformancetoday.Iwasborn...

2019-04-29 22:08:42

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