请英语高手帮我点评这篇四级作文,1现在电视上充斥着各种选秀节目2选秀节目流行的原因3你的观点TalentShowonTVNowadays,withthedevelopingeconomy,moreandmorepeoplepaytheirattentiontotheentertainment.I

　　请英语高手帮我点评这篇四级作文,

　　1现在电视上充斥着各种选秀节目

　　2选秀节目流行的原因

　　3你的观点

　　TalentShowonTV

　　Nowadays,withthedevelopingeconomy,moreandmorepeoplepaytheirattentiontotheentertainment.Inthissituation,allkindsoftalentshowsareappearedonTV.Therearetworeasonswhytalentshowsbecomesopopularinthefollowing.

　　First,peoplebecomerichersotheyhaveencoughmoneynotonlytotheeatandwarmth,butalsototheentertainment.Inthemordenworld,thepersonworksohardtoearnmoneythattheyneedtorelaxthemselvessometimes.Theappearanceofthetalentshowsfittheirneed.Moreover,theteensinthistimearemoreinterestinthetalentshows.Theyaresoactivethattheyspendalotoftimeonallkindsofshows.Moreandmoreteensareabsorbedinthetalentshows,sotheshowsbecomemoreandmorepopular.

　　AsfarasI'mconcerned,IliketowatchthetalentshowsonTV.Ithinkitisverycomfortable.Thetalentshowsaregoodfortheteensinmymind.Theshowsalwaysholdonsummerorwinterdayssothestudentscanplayapartonthembecausetheyalsohavealongholidayatthesametime.Theycanentertainthemselvesafteralongtimestudyandalsocanlearnalotofthingsthroughtheshows.