【帮忙】检查两个英语六级作文套句自己写的,帮忙检查一下语法和词汇用法.1.Meanwhile,meetingthetopic,avarietyofcomplicatedconsequences(itmayresultin)shouldbecastlighton.Simultaneously可以代替Meanwhile

　　【帮忙】检查两个英语六级作文套句

　　自己写的,帮忙检查一下语法和词汇用法.

　　1.Meanwhile,meetingthetopic,avarietyofcomplicatedconsequences(itmayresultin)shouldbecastlighton.

　　Simultaneously可以代替Meanwhileitmayresultin插入是否正确?生硬?

　　2.Toseekthetruthfromfacts,thecomparativeanalysisofbothreasonsandconsequencesinthediscussionwillperhapsdrawa(thefinal)conclusion.