【大家帮我改下2010年12月大学生英语六级的作文.权威和牛人进.最后给估个分.ViewOnUniversityRanking你对大学排行的看法1.目前高校排行十分盛行2.很多人对高校排行的看法不一,一些人认为……3.】

　　大家帮我改下2010年12月大学生英语六级的作文.权威和牛人进.最后给估个分.

　　ViewOnUniversityRanking

　　你对大学排行的看法

　　1.目前高校排行十分盛行

　　2.很多人对高校排行的看法不一,一些人认为……

　　3.我的看法

　　recently,therehavebeenargumentsaboutwhetherweshouldorshouldnotimplementuniversityrankingsystemwhileithasbecomaprevailingphenomenon,whichattractsstudentstogototopuniversities.

　　Tobeginwith,itisanundeniablefactthatgooduniversitiescanofferniceequipmentsandexcelllentacademicatmosphere,whichmaybetheonereasonstudentsprefertogotogooduniversities.

　　ontheotherhand,acritism(后来发现写错了应该是criticism)oftenheardthesedaysisthatstudentsareexcessivelyconcernedaboutuniversityrankingandingoretheessenceofeducation,Intheotherwords,aconundrumthatstudentsonlypursueuniversityrankingwhichisincreasinglyinfluencingourstudents'self-value.

　　Pesonally,Ivoiceasupportthatgoodstudentswillafterstudentswithmoreopportunitiestopromotetheirabilitieswhichmayputtheminadecentpositioninthejobhuntingprospect.Thus,itisreasonableforsomeauthoritiestomaketheirstudentsrecoginizetheirfavorableuniversities.onlyinthiswaycanwehaveabrilliantandprosperousfuture.

　　最后一段开头打错了Ivoiceasupportthatgooduniversities.另外句首大写不用考虑了.随便打的..记住打分!另外看看有没有走题.