想请英语高人帮忙修改一下这个英文自我介绍考研复试用的~本人英语基础不好,特别是语法部分,英文自我介绍虽有很多模板参考,但自己填完还是觉得有不少地方怪别扭的因为有的部分是模板
想请英语高人帮忙修改一下这个英文自我介绍
考研复试用的~
本人英语基础不好,特别是语法部分,英文自我介绍虽有很多模板参考,但自己填完还是觉得有不少地方怪别扭的
因为有的部分是模板,所以我只把自己觉得别扭的地方点列下来.
1.IhavealreadypassedCET-6inJuly2010.InthepasthalfyearIhavebeenpreparingforthepostgraduateexaminationbyrentaroomwhichnearanuniversity.ActuallythisismysecondtimetotakepartintheexamforthedreamofSuzhouUniversity.
2.Lifeisprecious.Itisnecessarytoseizeanychanceforself-development,especiallywhenyourealizewhatisyourreallylike.
3.asanoldsayinggoes,actionsspeaklouderthanwords.Righthere,IonlywanttosayIamopen-mindedandveryfondofPsychology.
4.Ilikereadingbooks,especiallythoseaboutliteratureandgeography.Ofcourse,besidespsychology.
Inaddition,duringmycollegeyears,Ihadbeenthreeconsecutiveyearsoftabletennischampionofourcollege.TheprocessofcompetitionmakemehaveabettermentalitywhenIfacedifficultesandpressure,moreover,theprocessoftrainingmakememoreperseveringwhenIdeterminedtodosomething.
5.Iwillsparenoefforttomasteragoodcommandofadvance
AppliedPsychology.
还可以多加分的!