谁能帮我修改一下这篇英语演讲稿!Goodafternoon,everyone!today,Iampleasedtobeabletostandhereandgiveyouashortspeech.Thetopicofmyspeechis“mytravel”.Ihopeyouwilllikeit.Mostpeopleliketotravel,becausetravel

　　谁能帮我修改一下这篇英语演讲稿!

　　Goodafternoon,everyone!today,Iampleasedtobeabletostandhereandgiveyouashortspeech.Thetopicofmyspeechis“mytravel”.Ihopeyouwilllikeit.

　　Mostpeopleliketotravel,becausetravelcanrelax.WhenItravel,Icanenjoythemountain,river,sky,animals.Theyarebeautiful,butalsotomakemyownmindtobecomebetter.

　　Doyouwanttomakefriendlypeople?Doyouwanttoclosethisnature?Doyouwanttobecomemoreoutgoing?Goforatravelwithyourfamilyoryourfriends,youwillhaveagreattime.

　　Youcantravelbycar,bussightseeing,youcanwalk,youcantakealotofphotos,visitmanyplacesofinterest.Look,itisinterestinghowah!

　　Thankyouverymuch!

　　再帮我添加几句,然后一些语法错误改一下,最好有激情一点.最好能再长一点.

　　别怪我要求太多,