这是我考研时写的作文,帮我看看能拿多少分这是我考研时写的两篇文章,大概就是这样的,请问分别能拿多少分啊?我好急.我是在北京地区的,是艺术生.DearLucy:Iamsoexcitedtowritethislettertoreco

　　这是我考研时写的作文,帮我看看能拿多少分

　　这是我考研时写的两篇文章,大概就是这样的,请问分别能拿多少分啊?我好急.我是在北京地区的,是艺术生.

　　DearLucy:

　　Iamsoexcitedtowritethislettertorecommendmyfavoritemoviestoyou,themoviesnameisMozart.

　　Iconsiderthatthismoviesissuitableforyou.Firstofall,Morzatisamusicalmast,themoviesintroduceshismusicalcomposition,dailylifeandhisfunnydeeds.Additionally,youlovemusicandpiano.soIthinkyouwilllikeitsomuch.

　　Bytheway,theweatherforecastsaiditwouldbecoldtomorrow,pleasekindlykeepwarm.Iwilllookforwardtoyourreply.

　　Yourssincerely,

　　Liming

　　小作文我大概记得这么多了,但是我记得当时写的时候是写够一百字的了,现在只想到这么多

　　Fromthesimplebutcompellingillustrationabovewecanseethattwopeopleareputtingmanythingsintotheseeandalotofthingsareinthesee.Thecartoondoesmirroraprevalentphenomenonincontemporarysociety.Thatismanypeoplearenotconsciousofprotectingmarineenvironment.

　　Actually,thisphenomenonhasattractedextensiveattentionofoursocietyandbecomeincresinglyunsatisfactory.Therefore,wecan’tignoresomeproblemsitbringsabout.Tobeginwith,ifwecan’tdealwiththisissueofmarineenvironment,itwillbeharmtooursocialdevelopmentandharmony.What’smore,itwouldbringaboutsomeotherproblems.Supposingweturnablindeyetothismatter,ourcommunitywillgofrombadtoworseandthenightmarewillcome.

　　Judgingfromwhathavebeenmentionedabout,itisimperativeforustocarryouteffectivemeasures.Firstofall,weshouldappealourauthoritiestoworkoutexplicitlawstocopewiththeissueofmarineenvironment.Additionally,apublizicingeducationalcampaignissupposedtoenforcetoenhancecitizen’sawarenessaboutprotectingmarineenvironment.However,practiceisthemostessentialelement.weoughttopayattentiontoitfromourselvesandasamodelforotherstofollow.

　　PS：希望你们说出我能得这么多分的理由.希望能根据考研的评分规则来给我打分

　　对了,莫扎特我打错了,考试时时写Mozart的.好像大师写错了,movies忘了写单数了,会扣多少分?还有sea,increasingly和publicizing我是打错的了,考试时写对的.