【姐姐,这是13年英语2的考研小作文,麻烦您给修改下Direction:supposeyourclassistoholdacharitysaleforkidsinneedofhelp.writeyourclassmatesanemailto1.informthemaboutthedetails,and2.EncouragethemtoparticipateDear】

　　姐姐,这是13年英语2的考研小作文,麻烦您给修改下

　　Direction:supposeyourclassistoholdacharitysaleforkidsinneedofhelp.writeyourclassmatesanemailto

　　1.informthemaboutthedetails,and

　　2.Encouragethemtoparticipate

　　DearClassmates.

　　IamwritingtoinformthemthatacharitysalewillbeheldbyourclassonJanuary3,2014onourcampus.

　　Now,letmeintroducethedetailedinformationaboutthecharitysaletothem.Tobeginwith,theaimofholdingthecharitysaleistoassistancethechildrenintheremoteareawhocannotgotoschoolbecausetheycannotaffordthetuitionfees.What’smore,youcaneithersaleyourbooks,clothsandotherthings.Allthemoneyfromtheactivitywillbeusedtohelpthechildrenreturntoschool.

　　Onbehalfofallthepoorchildrentoexpressthankstoyouandyouractiveparticipationwillbepraised.

　　Yourssincerely,

　　LiMing