求英语高手,帮我改下考研英语小作文,受累!如果有语法错误,麻烦您帮我指出来,（这是12年英语2的小作文）Directions:Supposeyouhavefoundsomethingwrongwiththeelectronicdictionarythatyoubroughtfromanonli

　　求英语高手,帮我改下考研英语小作文,受累!

　　如果有语法错误,麻烦您帮我指出来,（这是12年英语2的小作文）

　　Directions:

　　Supposeyouhavefoundsomethingwrongwiththeelectronicdictionarythatyoubroughtfromanonlinestoretheotherday.Writeanemailtothecustomerservicecenterto

　　1.makeacomplaint,and

　　2.demandapromptsolution

　　Dearsirormadam,

　　Iamacustomerwhoregularlybuysomethingfromyouronlinestore,Iamcompletelydisappointedtofindthattheserviceyouprovideisfarfromsatisfactory.

　　IamreferringtothisthingthatIjustbuyanelectronicdictionaryfromyouronlinestoreinlastweek,buttherearesomeproblemswithit.Firstly,thedictionaryisbrokenwhenIreceiveit.Secondly,thebatteryneedschargingafteronlytwohoursofuse.

　　Therefore,somethingmustbedonetosolvetheproblems,becauseitbringmemuchtroubleinmystudy.Youcaneithercompensatemeatareasonablepriceoralternativelysendmeanewmachinebyexpressmail.Lastly,pleasetellmewhichsolutionyoupreferatyouearliestconvenience.

　　Yourssincerely,

　　LiMing