大家帮我挑一下这篇考研文章的毛病吧.,这是我写的,快考试了,大家有啥说,特别欢迎拍砖2012年的考研作文,一瓶酒掉地上了,一个人失望的说,全完了,一个人乐观地说；哦,还有一点.主题就是乐

　　大家帮我挑一下这篇考研文章的毛病吧.,这是我写的,快考试了,大家有啥说,特别欢迎拍砖

　　2012年的考研作文,一瓶酒掉地上了,一个人失望的说,全完了,一个人乐观地说；哦,还有一点.主题就是乐观.写一篇180字左右文章.挑挑毛病吧,快考试了,

　　aswecanseefromthepicture,therearedifferentattitudebetweemthemanontherightandthemanontheleftwhenabottleofdrinkfallingtotheground.oneissad,andanotheroneisoptimistic,obvious,thefellowwhoisoptimistichavebeenapreicatedbymostofus.

　　withtherapiddevelopmentofeconomy,competitionisincreasinglyfiere,thehardworkpressonusismoreheavythanbefore,andrequirementaboutcontrolingouremotionisstricter,allthatcallforustoformaoptimisticemotiontohandleourjobwell,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatoptimisticnatureisessentialqualificationthatanyonewhowantstoachievesuccessshouldpossess,andthisspiritwillhelpusthroughdifficultywithoutsufferingmuchpainfromdeepheart.

　　accordingly,itisimperativeforustotakesomemeasurestoenhancethesenseofoptimisticemotioninourdailylife,weshouldbearinmindthatoptimisticspiritisofgreatsignificancetobothoursocietyandourselves,everyoneshouldtreathisfutureandjobwithaoptimisticspiritandonlyinthisway,canweachievesuccessquicklyandonlyinthisway,canwepossessabrightmoodtofaceourfuture.