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  【考研最后一天,求批改英语作文!感激不尽!Asisvividlydepictedinthepicture,whenabottlefallsdown,twopeoplehavequiteoppositethoughts.Theoptimisticonethinksthatalthoughhavinglostwater,westillhavesomeleft.Onthepess】

  考研最后一天,求批改英语作文!感激不尽!

  Asisvividlydepictedinthepicture,whenabottlefallsdown,twopeoplehavequiteoppositethoughts.Theoptimisticonethinksthatalthoughhavinglostwater,westillhavesomeleft.Onthepessimisticpeople'sperspective,however,thefallenbottleturnsouttobeahugedisasterforhim,makinghimholdtheviewthateverythinghasgone.

  Thesceneinthepicture,accurately,demonstratesaprevailingphenomenonwhichpermeatesourcontemporarylife.Thereareoveralltwokindsofpeople,optimisticoneandpessimisticone,whoseattitudestowardslifeexperiencearequitediverse.Moreover,whattheythinkabouttheirlifecanfurtherexertsomeinfluenceontheirdestiny.Theoptimisticpeoplearealwayspositiveandgenerous,havingalotofbeautifulexpectationsforlife.Therefore,itisundeniablethattheycanovercomeanybarriersconfidently,nomatterhowdifficultitmaybe.Onthecontrary,thepessimisticpeoplehardlytacklelifeproblemseasily.Instead,itseemstobepain-stakingandstrugglingforthemtodealwiththesedifficulties.Theirlife,undoubtedly,lackshappinessandpleasure.

  Havinganalysingthetwoconditions,wecansimplyleadtotheconclusionthatweallshouldbeoptimisticaboutlife.Itcannotonlymakelifefullofjoy,butmaypavethewaytoyourowndreamsimultaneously.Moreover,whenfacedwithdifficulties,weareavailabletotakecourageandwisdomtofightagainstthem.Forexample,whenIwaspreparingformyfinalexam,nomatterhowdifficultthecourseisorhowurgenttheexamistobe,IkeeponthinkingthatIcanmakeitsuccessfully.Andnotsurprisingly,itvariablyturnsouttobeahappyendingforme.Merelyinnecessarymoodandattitudesforlifewillwebeabletoobtainthelifewhichweyearnfor.

  题目是2012大作文,希望多给一点建议,

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2019-05-02 19:32
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梁立军

  具体的语法和用词等就不逐句点评了——因为我不是英语老师.但可以跟你交流一下我的看法:1、技巧上讲,长句不宜太多,且不宜通篇刻意使用你能想到的“高水准”单词或短语——尤其是其用法还没完全掌握的情况下,要避免...

2019-05-02 19:37:31

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