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　　【2011考研作文AboutmoneyworshipInthemordensociety,alargenumberofpeoplesupposethatmoneyiseverything.Theycan’tlivewithoutmoneyintheirdailylife.Consequently,theyviewmoneyastheirownlives.Itisundeniablethatmoney,whichd】

　　2011考研作文

　　Aboutmoneyworship

　　Inthemordensociety,alargenumberofpeoplesupposethatmoneyiseverything.Theycan’tlivewithoutmoneyintheirdailylife.Consequently,theyviewmoneyastheirownlives.Itisundeniablethatmoney,whichdoesmuchbenefitinmanyrespects.Moneyhelpustoachieveourgoals.Whilebuyinglivingnecessitiesorstudingabroadforfurthereducation,whatthemostimportantandessentialthingweshouldconsiderismoney.Tosomeextent,moneynotonlyimprovesourmateriallifebutalsoourspirtuallife.

　　Asamatteroffact,everythinghastwosides.Toooften,avastcollectiongofpossessionendsuppossessingitsowner.Theassetweshouldvalue,asidefrommoney,arehealth,familyandlong-standingfriendship.TakeWarrenBuffettforexample,morethan99%ofhiswealthwillbedonatedtothefoundationsbenefitingschoolsandmedicalorganizations.Incontrast,hisfamilyandhewillgiveupnothingtheyneedbyfulfillingthis99%pledge.Moneyistherootofhappinessorsourceofevils,alldependsonourselves.Onlybytakingacorrectattitudecanwenotpursuemoneyblindly.

　　哪些地方还有问题,有哪些要改,希望不吝赐教

　　我自己准备的，自己写的

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2019-05-02 23:38

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　　Aboutmoneyworship【Aboutmammonworship】

　　Inthemordensociety,alargenumberofpeoplesupposethatmoneyiseverything.Theycan’tlivewithoutmoneyintheirdailylife.Consequently,theyview【regard】moneyastheirownlives.【Itisundeniablethatmoney,whichdoesmuchbenefitinmanyrespects.这句语法不对,不明白你要表达什么】Moneyhelp【helps】ustoachieveourgoals.While【when】buyinglivingnecessities【livinggoodsordailynecessities】orstudingabroadforfurthereducation,what【去掉】themostimportantandessentialthingweshouldconsiderismoney.Tosomeextent,moneyimproves【notonly】ourmateriallifebutalsoourspirtuallife.

　　Asamatteroffact,everythinghastwosides.Toooften,avastcollectiongofpossessionendsuppossessingitsowner【不太理解这句话,是名言还是你自己写的?】.Theassetweshouldvalue,asidefrommoney,are【主语是asset的话,用is】health,familyandlong-standingfriendship.TakeWarrenBuffettforexample,morethan99%ofhiswealthwillbedonatedtothefoundationsbenefitingschoolsandmedicalorganizations【将来时吗?他的钱不是已经捐给比尔盖茨的基金会了吗?】.Incontrast,hisfamilyandhewillgiveupnothingtheyneedbyfulfillingthis99%pledge.【Whether】moneyistherootofhappinessorsourceofevils,【去掉逗号这是一句话】alldependsonourselves.Onlybytakingacorrectattitudecanwenotpursuemoneyblindly.

　　尽量少使用自己不熟的单词,写作最主要的是表达清楚意思和语法正确（觉得你用从句的时候容易出错）,希望以上对你有所帮助.

2019-05-02 23:42:14

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