急求英语大神帮我看下这篇英语文章，修改一下文法,或者改生动点希望之星英语，希望大神帮我看看。主题是“我的中国梦”，再帮我写一篇也可以。悬赏不是问题，好的话我会再追加。Goo

　　急求英语大神帮我看下这篇英语文章，修改一下文法,或者改生动点

　　希望之星英语，希望大神帮我看看。主题是“我的中国梦”，再帮我写一篇也可以。悬赏不是问题，好的话我会再追加。

　　Goodmorning,everyone.

　　Everyonehashisowndream.Someonewantstobedoctors,teachers,orsoon.ButIhaveaspecialdream.

　　Ifyouuseacolortodescribemydream,Ithinkthatisgreen.Ihopeoneday,wecanliveinamuchcleanerworld.

　　Inthatday,wecanstopthepollution.Therewon’tbepollutionanymore.Theskywillbemuchbluer,waterwillbeclear.Wewillbeabletobreatheinthecleanair，anddrinkmuchcleanerwater.Andwe'llprotectforest,andtherewon'tbeanyanimalsorplantsextinction.

　　Ihopeitcometrueoneday.Weshoulddoourbesttokeeptheenvironmentcleanandtidy,makingourhomelandmorebeautiful,becausewehaveonlyoneearth.

　　That'sit.Thanksforlistening!