急求英语大神帮我看下这篇英语文章,修改一下文法,或者改生动点希望之星英语,希望大神帮我看看。主题是“我的中国梦”,再帮我写一篇也可以。悬赏不是问题,好的话我会再追加。Goo
急求英语大神帮我看下这篇英语文章,修改一下文法,或者改生动点
希望之星英语,希望大神帮我看看。主题是“我的中国梦”,再帮我写一篇也可以。悬赏不是问题,好的话我会再追加。
Goodmorning,everyone.
Everyonehashisowndream.Someonewantstobedoctors,teachers,orsoon.ButIhaveaspecialdream.
Ifyouuseacolortodescribemydream,Ithinkthatisgreen.Ihopeoneday,wecanliveinamuchcleanerworld.
Inthatday,wecanstopthepollution.Therewon’tbepollutionanymore.Theskywillbemuchbluer,waterwillbeclear.Wewillbeabletobreatheinthecleanair,anddrinkmuchcleanerwater.Andwe'llprotectforest,andtherewon'tbeanyanimalsorplantsextinction.
Ihopeitcometrueoneday.Weshoulddoourbesttokeeptheenvironmentcleanandtidy,makingourhomelandmorebeautiful,becausewehaveonlyoneearth.
That'sit.Thanksforlistening!