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  【作文求修改好的追分!英语作文!Iamverygladtohavereceivedyourletter.youaskedmyaboutmylifeonweekends.nowIwilltellyousomethingaboutit.asyoucansee,Iamverybusyonweekends.ihavetodomanyhomeworkandjoinlotsofo】

  作文求修改好的追分!英语作文!

  Iamverygladtohavereceivedyourletter.youaskedmyaboutmylifeonweekends.nowIwilltellyousomethingaboutit.asyoucansee,Iamverybusyonweekends.ihavetodomanyhomeworkandjoinlotsofout-of-schoolactivities.Sometimes,IalsodosomehouseworktohelpmyMom.inmyfreetime,Iwillgoshoppingwithmyfriends,IthinkitnotonlydoIlovetobutItisagoodwaytospendtimestayingwithfriends.whatagreatthing!althoughmyweekendsisenrichenough,Ibelievethatmanypeoplehasmorerelaxweekends.ihopemyweekendswillmorerelaxedlikeothersandiwishstudentstospendtheirweekendswithouthomework.that'sall.andhowdoyouspendyourweekends?pleasewritetomesoon.yours,lucy.

  c我希望可以详细点出错误。并且给点指导!

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2020-09-01 02:03
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  Iamverygladtohavereceivedyourletter.youaskedmyaboutmylifeonweekends.nowIwilltellyousomethingaboutit.asyoucansee,Iamverybusyonweekends.ihavetodomany(many--much)homeworkandjoin(join---joinin)lotsofout-of-schoolactivities.Sometimes,IalsodosomehouseworktohelpmyMom.inmyfreetime,Iwillgoshoppingwithmyfriends,Ithinkit(加上is)notonly(because)do(去掉do)IlovetobutItisagoodwaytospendtimestayingwithfriends.whatagreatthing!althoughmyweekendsisenrich(改为rich)enough,Ibelievethatmanypeoplehas(has--have)morerelax(relax--relaxing)weekends.ihopemyweekendswill(加上be)morerelaxed(relax---relaxing)likeothersandiwishstudentstospendtheirweekendswithouthomework.that'sall.andhowdoyouspendyourweekends?pleasewritetomesoon.

2020-09-01 02:05:08

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