求高手点评以下的英语作文.Mr.SchoolmasterMynameisPeter,Junior2studentinourschool.Nowadays,Imadeareportofthedreamaboutourfuturework.Now,Iwanttoshowthiereporttoyou.Inthisreport,thereare50boysandthesamenumbe

　　求高手点评以下的英语作文.

　　Mr.SchoolmasterMynameisPeter,Junior2studentinourschool.Nowadays,Imadeareportofthedreamaboutourfuturework.Now,Iwanttoshowthiereporttoyou.

　　Inthisreport,thereare50boysandthesamenumberofgirlsjoinus.While35%ofgrilswishtobeateacherandonly5p-ercentofboyshavethesamedream.Also,thereare20%ofgirlsandthesamenumberofboyswishtobeadoctor.Butinbecomingabusinessmanorbusinesswoman,thereareonly5%ofgirlswishtobeand5timesinboys.Ofcoursetherear-ealittlepeopledon'tknowwhattheywillbe.Only5%inboysandthesamenumberingirls.

　　So,Iwanttohaveyouropinionandyoursuggestion.Thankyou.