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  雅思大作文求批改评分Somepeoplebelievethatvisitorstoothercountriesshouldfollowlocalcustomsandbehaviour.Othersdisagreeandthinkthatthehostcountryshouldwelcomeculturaldifferences.Discussboththeseviewsandgiv

  雅思大作文求批改评分

  Somepeoplebelievethatvisitorstoothercountriesshouldfollowlocalcustomsand

  behaviour.Othersdisagreeandthinkthatthehostcountryshouldwelcomecultural

  differences.

  Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

  Thereisagrowingtendencyforpeopletotravelglobally.Somepeoplearguethatthosewho

  visitothercountriesshoulddoasthelocaldo.Whiletherestdenounceitandbelieve

  thehostaresupposedtoacceptculturediversity.Iamwritingthisessaytoexplorer

  thisisseufromdiverseperspectives.

  Ononehand,itcanberudetotraveltoothercountrieswithoutfollowinglocalbehavior

  .Afterall,differentculturehasdifferentethnicstandards.Asaconsequence,those

  actionsseemedtobecorrectinonecountrymaybenotapprovedinotheroneandtheyhave

  nosenseofwherewrongis.Withthedevelopmentofthisphenomenon,thehoststatesmight

  benotsowillingtoacceptforeigners,whichformsablockinworldharmony.

  Ontheotherhand,itisobviouslytruethatvisitorshavetherighttoperformculturally

  unlessthereisacertainlocallawagainstit.Withoutthoseculturalperformances,the

  indigenouscitizenswouldonlylearnaboutdiversecultureonmediaorbooks.Therefore

  ,foreigntravellersplayasignificantroleinspreadingandintakingculture,which

  contributesalottoglobalculturediversity.

  Afterevaluatingbothsidesofthistopic,wemaysafelyreachtheconclusionthatthe

  positiveeffectsfaroutweighthenegativeones.Aslongasgovernmentsstrengthenthe

  effortsofpopularizingvariouscivilizations'sinformation,spreadingcultureshouldbea

  wonderfulapproachtomaintainworldpeace.

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2020-09-01 00:44
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丁二锐

  7分,还不错,例子呢,没看到.

  那个Iamwritingthisessaytoexploretheissue...这句话就不要了

  localbehaviours

  differentcultureshave...

  wherethewrongis?whattheyhavedonewrong

  mightnotbe

  .Aslongasgovernmentsstrengthentheeffortsofpopularizingvariouscivilizations'sinformation

  这个,strengthentheefforts变emphasisecivilisations'info.

  推荐用英式拼写!

2020-09-01 00:45:14
曹兵

  我觉着分略高了。。。毕竟字数就不够

2020-09-01 00:46:49

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