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　　DearEnglishteacher:Youwerelaborious!Herethefirstwishyouhappyteachers'day.Thankyouforyourkindnessandpatience.Yougaveusexactlywhatweneedandwant.Tohaveyouasourteacherisourgreatestpleasure!Weallloveyou!Letyourworkw

　　DearEnglishteacher:

　　Youwerelaborious!Herethefirstwishyouhappyteachers'day.Thankyouforyourkindnessandpatience.Yougaveusexactlywhatweneedandwant.Tohaveyouasourteacherisourgreatestpleasure!Weallloveyou!Letyourworkwell,healthybody,alltheluck!

　　WangZiXiao

　　OnSeptember11,2012

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2020-09-04 00:01

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　　第二句语句不通,第四句动词时态不对（而且need和want是同义反复）,第五句主语问题,第七句用词不当.

　　突显你的ChineaseEnglish,我个人虽然也没完全摆脱这个缺点,但我愿意稍微修改下,跟你分享,姑妄听之.

　　DearEnglishTeacher,

　　Youweretoilsome!HappyTeachers'Day!Thanksforyourkindnessandpatience.Yougaveuswhatweneeded.Itisourgreatpleasuretohaveyourasourteacher.Weallloveyou!Wishyouenjoyyourworkandkeephealthy.Alltheluck!

2020-09-04 00:04:52

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