【帮帮忙纠错英语以下是一片英语短文,语法结构较为简单,可能存在不少错误,把短文的错误纠正过来,最好能把短文改得高级点（当然,最重要的是把错误改过来就好~呵呵~（题目希望能帮我翻译】

　　帮帮忙纠错英语

　　以下是一片英语短文,语法结构较为简单,可能存在不少错误,把短文的错误纠正过来,最好能把短文改得高级点（当然,最重要的是把错误改过来就好~呵呵~（题目希望能帮我翻译下,

　　生命的感动

　　——读《最后一片叶子》有感

　　Afterreadingthiswonderfulstory,Ihavesomedeepfeelings.

　　Theoneistheimportanceofnevergivingup.Ifyougiveup,andthennoonecouldhelpyou.Ifyouhaveadream,whytobefeartocatchit,whynottogoafterit,andwhynotto(投入）allwhatyoucoulddotorealizeit?Remember,thereisbelieftowin,thereishope.Nevergiveup,andyouwillseethewonder.

　　Anotheristhekindness.ThekindnessthattheoldBehrman,agreatestartistinmyheartshowed,movesme.Tosaveagirl,theoldartistriskingdeathtopaint,justwanttotellher:"Don'tgiveup!"It'sauniversallove,andthislovegiveswarmtoourlives,toourfriends,andtothewholeworld.