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  【帮我检查一下这篇文章有没有问题Motherland,Ialwayshaveonestrandsofsenseofprideandsenseofresponsibilityasfor.Beingproudisthatthemotherlandalreadyculturehaving5000yearshistory,havecreatedmanybeingworthitcult】

  帮我检查一下这篇文章有没有问题

  Motherland,Ialwayshaveonestrandsofsenseofprideandsenseofresponsibilityasfor.

  Beingproudisthatthemotherlandalreadyculturehaving5000yearshistory,havecreatedmanybeingworthitculturalrelicsandhistoricsitesthatweadore.Calmdownbythatuninterruptedgrowth,ourcountryhaveexperiencedalotofdynastyturbulence,afteroppressingandthewaroutburstforfeudalistsociety,befoundedandopeningtotheoutsideworldtoRepublicofChina,ourcountrypeoplesuccessivelyhassetofftheheadofafamilyformliving,actingonself'sownfreely,ourcountryalreadybecomesaGreatPowernow,alotofproductalreadyentersinternationalmarket,agalaxyoftalentmoreoverallaretohaveafacileimagination,thoughtopenstotheoutsideworld,intelligencesurpasses,Ibelievein,makegreateffortsprocessafewalthoughourcountrydoesnotbelongtothedevelopedcountrynow,wearesuretokeepafootholdontheworld,becomeandthedevelopedcountrypart,ThisisthatIneedtosingthepraisesofandisthatmakesgreatefforts.

  Ilovemegoingthroughallthevicissitudesoflifesobutthemotherlandwhonotfallingdownbut,beforehers,haveexperiencedsomanydisturbances,havingbeenreallytomakemebefullofpraise,thatshehasbeenpregnantwithpromisingmyscenerythescenicspotelegantandpretty,heroicfigure,mymotherlandwhostillhasmanymovingonetosongandtearsisfirm,rich,Iamlovingherdeeply.

  我怕个别的地方有错误

  所以希望大家仔细看看

  这不是我自己写的

  也不是googl翻译的

  是我自己从网上找的

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2020-09-03 11:15
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陈勇辉

  onestrandsof

  proudthat

  weadore时态有问题吗?看看

  alotofdynastyturbulence后接复数吧?

  befoundedandopeningbe和open的时态应该一致

  ourcountrypeople定语修饰

  以后再看没时间了

2020-09-03 11:18:03

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