（1）这篇比较短小,词汇量也不大

　　Hello!I'mAmy.Ihaveagoodfriend.HernameisZhangYun.HerEnglishnameisBetty.SheisaChinesegirl.Sheistenyearsold.SheisintheNo.5Primaryschool.SheisinClass7,Grade2.SheisgoodatEnglish.ShelikesChinese,too.Sheiskindandveryfriendly.Shelikeshelpingothers.Shelikessingingandplayingbasketball.Thisismygoodfriend.Doyouwanttoknowmore?

　　（2）这篇语句不错,有点长但是可以删减的很好

　　Ihaveafriend.HernameisCandy.Sheistwelveyearold.Shehasblackandshorthair.Shehasalittlemouth,twobigeyes.Sheissocute.Hermomanddadloveher.Shehasahappyfamily.Herfriendslikehertoo,Soshe’shappyeveryday.

　　SheisastudentofYiZongFuXiao.SheisinClassFourGradeSix.Shestudiesveryhard.Englishisherfavouritesubject.ShelikestospeakEnglish.ShecanspeakEnglishverywellnow.Shealwayssays“Learnbydoing.”SoshethinksspeakingisveryimportantinlearningEnglish.

　　Weareverybusystudyingwhenweareinschool.Butontheweekend,wearefree.WeoftendohomeworktogetheronSaturdays.Afterthat,wecanwatchTVathome.Sometimes,weplaygames.Wehavethesamehobbies.ShelikesridingbikesandwatchingTVandsodoI.Herfavouritesportisswimming.She’sverygoodatit.Sheoftenteachesmehowtoswiminsummer.

　　Ilikeherverymuch.Iamluckytobeherfriend.

　　（3）这篇适中

　　Ihaveagoodfriend.HernameisWuMi.Sheisthirteenyearsold,Butsheisshort.Shehasbigeyes,asmallmouth,asmallnoseandaroundface.Itisverycute.Shelikesreadingbooksanddomanually.Herskillfulhands,canmakeapleasantsurprise.Ilikeherverymuch,becausewearegoodfriends.

　　（4）关于新年决心的

　　Anewyear,anewstart,whenIstandontheedgeoftheanewyear,Ican'thelpthinkingaboutmyplanofnextyear.

　　Justastheoldsaying:“Wellbeganisthehalfofthesuccess.”SoIdecidethatIshouldbeatworkwhiletheothersarestillrelaxing,andthen,atthebeginning,I'mquickerthantheothersandofcourseIwillgetbetterresultthantheothers.

　　But,whatIreallydecidetodoisthatImustmakegoodofanytimeIcansparethoughitseemsimpossible.While,IwilldomybesttoliveupwithwhatIhaveplanned,andtheresultwillproveit.

　　（5）NewYear'sDetermination

　　Inthenewyear,Iwillworkhardinschool.Iwillpayattentioninclass,completeassignmentsontimeanddoextrareadingspreactivelytoenhancemyunderstandingsaboutthetopicscoveredinclass.

　　Iwillleadahealthylifestylebybalancingworkandleisure,exercisingregularlyandkeepingahealthydiet.

　　Iwillspendmoretimewithmyfamiliesandfriends.Iwillsharewiththemmyjoysandtearsandgivethemahandwhentheyneedhelp.

　　Let2011beayearofhappinessandfulfilment.

　　（6）blessyou——China

　　OnMay12th,apowerfulearthquakemeasuring7.8ontheRichterScalehasattackedthevillagewhichwascalledWenchuaninSichuanProvince.

　　IsurfedtheInternetfrommorningtillnighttoseewhatwerehappeninginthatplace.IfellverydistressedthatwhenIsawthepictures.Thewholevillageswerewipedoutbytheterribleearthquake.Hundredsofpeoplelosttheirlivesorwererenderedhomeless.Butfortunately,millionsofpeoplehomeorbroadhavegivenfreelyinresponsetotheappealforthevictimsoftheearthquake.

　　Ihopeallofuscantryourbesttohelpthevictimsoutofthisterri