请大神帮忙改下这篇作文改的更高级一点Onthelastsummerholiday,IwenttoHangzhoumyselfinordertovisitmyaunt.AssoonasIarrived,myauntsaidthatHangzhouwasabeautifulandmorderncitywhichhasvariousoftouristatt

　　请大神帮忙改下这篇作文改的更高级一点

　　Onthelastsummerholiday,IwenttoHangzhoumyselfinordertovisitmyaunt.AssoonasIarrived,myauntsaidthatHangzhouwasabeautifulandmorderncitywhichhasvariousoftouristattractionlikeXilake.Butshealsotoldmenottogooutjustyourself.Because,asastranger,Hangzhouwasabsolutelyhugeforme,anditwaseasytolosemyway.ButonedayIcan'thelpgoingoutmyselfforthebeautifulscenerywhenmyauntwenttowork.

　　Asmyaunt'swords,IlostmywaytheinstantthatIleftawayfromthehouse.Thenbyaskinghelpfrompassers-by,Idecidedtotakeabus.Becauseinaccordingtotheirwords,thebuscouldarrivetheplacewhereIwantedtogo.However,tomydisappointed,whenIgottothedestination,IfoundthatIwerenotfamiliarwiththeplacethatIarrived.ThenIimmediatelynoticedthatItakethewrongbus.Inthecircumstance,Askinghelpfromstrangerswasnecessaryandsignificant.Fortunatly,theysaidthatthebus311canarrivetheplacethatIsaid.SoItakeabusagain.However.whenthebusarrivedIsuddenlyfoundIwenttothewrongdirection.WhatIcoulddonowwastocallmyaunttocatchme,tobehonest,Ididn'twanttodothat.Nevertheless,itwasverylate.Itwas9o'clockwhenImetmyaunt.Shesaidshewasveryworried.ItoldherIwasgoodandIwasveryhappyandexciting.BecausetodayIseetheXilakewhenIwasonthebus.