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  【麻烦修改这两篇英文日记,August23.2009SundaySunnyItisafinedaytoday.Afterthedinner,MymotherandIwalkedatxxroad.onthebridge,Isawalittlegirlclimedtheguardrail,andIsawaverylovelydog,ItwasverysmallIhaveeverse】

  麻烦修改这两篇英文日记,

  August23.2009SundaySunny

  Itisafinedaytoday.

  Afterthedinner,MymotherandIwalkedatxxroad.onthebridge,Isawalittlegirlclimedtheguardrail,andIsawaverylovelydog,ItwasverysmallIhaveeverseen.

  TodayImadealearningprogram,ImustimprovemyEnglish.

  August24.2009MondaySunny

  Afterwehadwalked,onthewayhome,Isawaoldmaninthesquare,Althoughhewasoverseventyyearsold,Hewasstillactive,Hedancedamongalargecrowdofyoungpeople,HelooksveryhealthIthough.

  Ididn'tplaytheviolinafewdays,TomorrowIwillpracticeitanhour.

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  August23.2009SundaySunny

  Itisafinedaytoday.

  Afterdinner,mymotherandIwalkedonxxroad.Onthebridge,Isawalittlegirlclimedtheguardrail,andIsawaverylovelydog.ItwasthesmallestdogIhaveeverseen.

  TodayImadealearningprogram.ImustimprovemyEnglish.

  August24.2009MondaySunny

  Whenwewalkedonthewayhome,Isawaoldmaninthesquare.Althoughhewasoverseventyyearsold,hewasstillactive.Hedancedamongalargecrowdofyoungpeopleandhelookedveryhealthy.

  Ihadn'tplaytheviolinforafewdays,sotomorrowIwillpracticeitforanhour.

  注意一些大小写,标点,连词,不适合的形容词等等.

2020-09-09 13:06:07

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