【麻烦修改这两篇英文日记,August23.2009SundaySunnyItisafinedaytoday.Afterthedinner,MymotherandIwalkedatxxroad.onthebridge,Isawalittlegirlclimedtheguardrail,andIsawaverylovelydog,ItwasverysmallIhaveeverse】
麻烦修改这两篇英文日记,
August23.2009SundaySunny
Itisafinedaytoday.
Afterthedinner,MymotherandIwalkedatxxroad.onthebridge,Isawalittlegirlclimedtheguardrail,andIsawaverylovelydog,ItwasverysmallIhaveeverseen.
TodayImadealearningprogram,ImustimprovemyEnglish.
August24.2009MondaySunny
Afterwehadwalked,onthewayhome,Isawaoldmaninthesquare,Althoughhewasoverseventyyearsold,Hewasstillactive,Hedancedamongalargecrowdofyoungpeople,HelooksveryhealthIthough.
Ididn'tplaytheviolinafewdays,TomorrowIwillpracticeitanhour.