HowtoWritethetopicsentence

　　I.TheWritingoftopicsentence分主题句的写法

　　★主题句支持主旨句并由段内其他句子支持

　　★主题句对段落而言要有概括力而对主旨而言要有体现力

　　分主题的写作①分主题论题topic具体观点主旨的某一具体体现①分主题论题topic具体观点E.g.1IsItWisetoMakeFriendsOnline?

　　分主题--Makingfriendsonline(论题)mightresultinlackingcommunicationwithfriendsinreallife(具体观点).--Makingfriendsonline(论题)mayhelpusenlargeourcircleoffriendsconsiderably(具体观点).①分主题论题topic(具体观点)

　　E.g.2AMajorAdvantage/DisadvantageofAdvertisingonTelevision(分主题)--Themajor

　　advantageofTVadvertisingliesinitsefficiencyinmessageconveyance.--The

　　majordisadvantageofTVadvertisingliesinitsnegativeinfluenceonyoung

　　children.

　　②观点不能过于宽泛E.g.3---Makingfriendsonlineishelpful.观点过于宽泛可改为---

　　Makingfriendsonlineishelpfulinbroadeningourfriendcircle.②观点不能重复

　　E.g.4TheImportanceofKeepingaGoodMood---Thefirstreasonisthatwe

　　needtokeepagoodmood.观点过于重复可将其具体化为---Firstlyweneedtokeepagoodmoodtobuildharmoniousinterpersonalrelationship.---Weneedtokeepagoodmood

　　firsttokeepushealthybothphysicallyandmentally.

　　Exercises1.Cellphoneisveryimportanttoourlife.meansofcommunication/entertainment

　　wayofgettinginformation2.Women’sroleismoredifficulttoplaythanthat

　　ofmen.constantphysicaltroublessocialtroubles③分主题要有足够的概括性非论证过程或详细的描写

　　E.g.5---Firstlythemostpopularfunctionofacellphoneisthatwecansend

　　SMStofulfillaninstantcontactwithothers.观点为具体细节非命题形式的论点可改为---Firstly

　　communicationisthemostpopularfunctionofacellphone.WecansendSMSto

　　fulfillaninstantcontactwithothersanywhereandataytime.E.g.6---Firsta100-year-oldmanwasreportedtodophysicalexerciseeveryday.Hesaidthatitissportsthatmakehimstayhealthy.分论题为具体描述非命题形式的论点应作为论据论点可为---Physicalexercisehelpstokeepourselveshealthy.

　　④分主题的表达要避免主观性E.g.7---InthisparagraphIwilltalkaboutwhypeoplegoto

　　college.---Peoplehavemanycomplexreasonsforgoingtocollege.

　　E.g.8---Inmyopinioneveryoneshouldexercise.---Everyoneshouldexercisetoreducestressmaintainahealthyweightandfeelbetteroverall.E.g.8---Ithinkstudents’educationfeesaremuchtoohigh.---Students’educationfeesneedtobeexplainedandjustified.

　　⑤分主题的表达形式要规范1分主题要用完整的句子表达2分主题最好用陈述句表达

　　E.g.---WhyshouldwekeepagoodmoodunderwhatevercircumstanceFirsttobecalm

　　enoughtomakedecisions.可改为---Thefirstreasonforustokeepagoodmood

　　underwhatevercircumstanceisthatitcanhelpuscalmdowntomakesensible

　　decision.E.g.10---Whyshouldn’twekeephealthybydoingregularexercise反意疑问句反意疑问句表述内容带有强烈主观情感可改为---Weshouldkeephealthybydoingregularexercise.⑥分主题的表达要兼顾行文的连贯与衔接保证行文连贯性的关键★主旨的重复或变体分论点E.g.11TheBestWaytoStayHealthyThesisStatement:---Thebestwaytostayhealthyistokeepabalanceddiet.Topicsentences:---Thefirstreasonforabalance

　　dietasthebestwaytostayhealthyisthat…..---Thatabalanceddietisthebestwaytostayhealthyalsoliesinthat…..---Weinsistonabalanceddietasthebestwaytostayhealthyalsobecause…..Exercises:WritingofTopicSentences添加合适的主题句1____________