作文要求：Somepeoplethinkitisawasteoftimeforchildrentodohousework;instead,theyshouldbeencouragedtostudyhard,takephysicalexerciseorparticipateinextracurricularactivities.Whatisyouropinion?Writeacompositionofabout

　　作文要求：Somepeoplethinkitisawasteoftimeforchildrentodohousework;instead,theyshouldbeencouragedtostudyhard,takephysicalexerciseorparticipateinextracurricularactivities.Whatisyouropinion?Writeacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:ShouldChildrenBeEncouragedtoDoHousework?Youaretowriteinthreeparts.Inthefirstpart,statespecificallywhatyouropinionis.Inthesecondpart,provideoneortworeasonsoryourexperience(s)tosupportyouropinion.Inthelastpart,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionormakeasummary.Youshouldsupplyanappropriatetitleforyourcomposition.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,languageandappropriateness.Failuretofollowtheinstrutionsmayresultinalossofmarks.

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　　It'saheatedtopicwhetherchildrenshouldbeencouragedtodohousework.Somepeoplesaythatchildrenshoulddomorehouseworkintheirsparetime.Theotherssuggestthatchildrenshouldstudyandplayinsteadofdoinganyhousework.Inmyopinion,it'snecessarytoencouragechildrentodosomehousework.

　　First,doingmorehouseworkcanmakechildrenmoreindependent.Forexample,theycandosomelaundry,ordosomesimplecooking.Therefore,whentheirparentsareout,theycanfendforthemselves.Evenaftertheyleavethehome,theyaremoreadaptabletothesociety.Inaddition,doinghouseworkcanhelpchildrenberesponsible.Nowadays,childrenarethecenterofafamilyinwhichalmostchinesefamilyhaveonlychild.Generally,anonlychildwillspoilbytheirparentsandtheyneverdidhouseworkwhichcanleadthemselfishness.Accordingtothehousework,childrencanrealizehowhardthehouseworkis,whattheirparentsdoingisadifficultjob.Theyhavetoshouldertheresponsibilitybecausehouseworkshouldbedonebyeveryone.

　　Inconclusion,childrenshoulddomorehouseworktoimprovetheirability.Theycanlearnsomethingmorethanwhattheyabsorbintheschool.