修改英文文章语法错误如题DuringtheSpringandAutumnPeriod(770-476B.C.).therewasamanwhosenamewasYuBoya.Yuboyafamousmusicmasteratthattime,havingagoodcommandofthetemperamentandsuperbskillsinplayingthemusical
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DuringtheSpringandAutumnPeriod(770-476B.C.).therewasamanwhosenamewasYuBoya.Yuboyafamousmusicmasteratthattime,havingagoodcommandofthetemperamentandsuperbskillsinplayingthemusicalinstrument.Hewasbrightandeagertolearnwhenhewasyoung.Hehadformallyacknowledgedseveralexpertsashisteachers,andhisskillsinplayingthemusicalinstrumenthadalreadyreachedafairlyhighlevel.Buthestillfeltthathecouldnotsuperblyexpressthevariousthingswhichhaddeeplyimpressedhim.Knowingwhatwasinhismind,histeachertookhimtothepenglaiIsland,afabledabodeofimmortals,ontheEastChinaSeabyboat.Ontheisland,histeacherlethimenjoythenaturalscenariosandlistentotheroaringofthegreatwaves.lookingintothedistance,Boyasawthatthewaveswereturbulentandthatthewhitebreakersleaptskywards.Seabirdswerecirclingintheair,andtheircryingwasverypleasanttotheear.Treesweregreenandintriguingfeelingwelledupinhismind,asifhehadheardtheharmoniousandcharmingmusicofnature.Hecouldn'thelptakinghismusicalinstrumentandplayingit.Hefollowedhisinclinationswhilehewasplaying,andincorporatedthebeautifulnaturewithhismusic,thusreachingarealmofthoughthehadneverexperiencedbefore.Seeingthis,theteachersaidtohime,''Youhavemasteredtheartofplaying."
Once,onthe15thdayofthe8thlunarmonth,hewasboatingforsight-seeing.Themoonwasbrightandacoolbreezewasblowinggently.Withmyriadsofthoughtswellingupinhismind,hebegantoplaythemusicalinstrument.Themelodiousmusicbecamemoreandmorebeautifulwhenamanonthebankshouted"bravo!"Hearingtheshouting,Boyacameoutoftheboat,andsawawoodcutterstandingonthebank.Heknewthatthismanwaskeenlyappreciativeofhistalents,becauseheunderstoodhismusic.Heimmediatelyinvitedthewoodcuttertohisboatand,fullofzest,heplayedthemusicalinstrumentforhim.WhenBoyaplayedapieceofmusiceulogizingthehighmountains,thewoodcuttersaid,"wonderful!ThemelodyisasmagnificentanddignifiedasMountTaiwhichreachestothesky!"Whenheplayedapieceofmusicdepictingtheturbulentwaves,thewoodcuttersaid,"Wonderful!Themelodyisasvastandmightyasthegreatrivers!"Boyaw