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  修改英文文章语法错误如题DuringtheSpringandAutumnPeriod(770-476B.C.).therewasamanwhosenamewasYuBoya.Yuboyafamousmusicmasteratthattime,havingagoodcommandofthetemperamentandsuperbskillsinplayingthemusical

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  DuringtheSpringandAutumnPeriod(770-476B.C.).therewasamanwhosenamewasYuBoya.Yuboyafamousmusicmasteratthattime,havingagoodcommandofthetemperamentandsuperbskillsinplayingthemusicalinstrument.Hewasbrightandeagertolearnwhenhewasyoung.Hehadformallyacknowledgedseveralexpertsashisteachers,andhisskillsinplayingthemusicalinstrumenthadalreadyreachedafairlyhighlevel.Buthestillfeltthathecouldnotsuperblyexpressthevariousthingswhichhaddeeplyimpressedhim.Knowingwhatwasinhismind,histeachertookhimtothepenglaiIsland,afabledabodeofimmortals,ontheEastChinaSeabyboat.Ontheisland,histeacherlethimenjoythenaturalscenariosandlistentotheroaringofthegreatwaves.lookingintothedistance,Boyasawthatthewaveswereturbulentandthatthewhitebreakersleaptskywards.Seabirdswerecirclingintheair,andtheircryingwasverypleasanttotheear.Treesweregreenandintriguingfeelingwelledupinhismind,asifhehadheardtheharmoniousandcharmingmusicofnature.Hecouldn'thelptakinghismusicalinstrumentandplayingit.Hefollowedhisinclinationswhilehewasplaying,andincorporatedthebeautifulnaturewithhismusic,thusreachingarealmofthoughthehadneverexperiencedbefore.Seeingthis,theteachersaidtohime,''Youhavemasteredtheartofplaying."

  Once,onthe15thdayofthe8thlunarmonth,hewasboatingforsight-seeing.Themoonwasbrightandacoolbreezewasblowinggently.Withmyriadsofthoughtswellingupinhismind,hebegantoplaythemusicalinstrument.Themelodiousmusicbecamemoreandmorebeautifulwhenamanonthebankshouted"bravo!"Hearingtheshouting,Boyacameoutoftheboat,andsawawoodcutterstandingonthebank.Heknewthatthismanwaskeenlyappreciativeofhistalents,becauseheunderstoodhismusic.Heimmediatelyinvitedthewoodcuttertohisboatand,fullofzest,heplayedthemusicalinstrumentforhim.WhenBoyaplayedapieceofmusiceulogizingthehighmountains,thewoodcuttersaid,"wonderful!ThemelodyisasmagnificentanddignifiedasMountTaiwhichreachestothesky!"Whenheplayedapieceofmusicdepictingtheturbulentwaves,thewoodcuttersaid,"Wonderful!Themelodyisasvastandmightyasthegreatrivers!"Boyaw

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方秋华

  单词错误:1.第一大段最后一行theteachersaidtohime中,hime应该改为him2.第三大段,第一行peoplehavederived中havederived应该分开写,即写成havederived语法错误:1.第一大段第二行,Yuboyafamousmusicma...

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