请帮我改一篇TOEFL作文Doparentsserveasthemostbecomingteachers?Somepeopleholdtheopinionthatthemilieuachildliveincantrulylearnsomethingfromexperiences.Iconcedetheirsentiment.Nevertheless,frommyperspective,childrenl

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　　Doparentsserveasthemostbecomingteachers?Somepeopleholdtheopinionthatthemilieuachildliveincantrulylearnsomethingfromexperiences.Iconcedetheirsentiment.Nevertheless,frommyperspective,childrenlearnmorefromtheirparentsandparentsarethebestteachers.

　　Individuallyspeaking,IgetalotfrommyparentsandIalwaysthinktheyactasmymodels.Deeplyrespectedbyme,myfathersufficesforagratifyingexampleforme.WhenIwasalittlegirl,Iconsidermyfathertobethesuperlativemanintheworldandhisdidinfluencemeoneveryaspect.Forinstance,myfatheralwaysimpressedthesignificanceofstudyingonmeandhesetanexample.Attheageof34,aftergraduatingfromauniversityandworkedformanyyears,hepreparedtoattendanexaminationtofurtherhiseducationandgethismasterdegree.Althoughhehasn’ttouchedsomeacademicbooksforyears,hedidhisutmosttostudy.IwillneverforgetthemomentwhenIwakeupinthemidnight,Icaughtasightofafigurewritinginfrontofadeskwritingbythelight.Undoubtedly,hewasenrolledbyhardwork.Afterwards,theimprintthatweshouldneverknockofflearning,nomatterhowoldweareingrainedinmymind.

　　Anadditionalfactorinvolvestherecognitionthattheinstructionfromparentsisamoreeffectiveaccesstoknowledgeandinformationforachild.Theinabilityofdistinguishingtherightfromthewrongtakesuncall-forstepsforachildtounderstandthetruth.What’sworse,somewrongthoughtsmaybeformedinachild’smind.Thereforeparents’teachingismoreeffectiveandefficient.

　　However,itisveryimportantnottotakethisassertiontoofar.Theadvantagesoflearningfromthesocietycannotbeignored.Onlywhenachildhashis/herownacquaintancecanhe/shecomprehendbetter.

　　Judgingfromtheevidenceofferedabove,wecanarriveattheconclusionthatparentsarethebestteachersandnothingcanbethesubstitute,especiallywhencombinedwithexperiences.