Nowadaysmoreandmorestudentsattendthetrainingclasses(tutoringschool补习学校)orhiretutors.Manypeoplethinkthattutoringschoolsgive(provide)thestudentsmorechancestocommunicatewithteachers.Andthestudentscanmakeupforwhattheymissorfailtounderstandintheirregularschools.Manystudentsthinkthatsuchhelpisnecessary.

　　Althoughtakingtutoringclassesorhiringtutorscouldhelponeinmanyways,itcertainlyhasitsdisadvantages.Forexample,thestudentsmaygetusedtodependingonothersorhelp.What'sworse,thosewhostudywithtutorsorthosewhoattendtutoringschoolsmightnotpayattentionwhentheygototheirregularschools.

　　Inmyopinion,tutoringschoolsarenotnecessary.AsfarasIknow,alotofmyclassmatesdoattenddifferentkindsofafterschoolprograms.Ithinkitistheirparentswhopushthemtodothatbecausetheythinkitistotheirchildren'sbestinterest.Inmyschool,mostoftheteachersdon'tagreewiththat,either.Ofcause,theyneversayno.Whenwefinishourwork,weshouldrelaxanddothingswelike.(Justasthesayinggoes,”AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”这是我加的,你可以不要)Inaword,Idon’tthinktutoringisnecessaryatall.

　　你的文章思路很清楚.总的句子结构也不错.我把几个词改了下.

　　Trainingschools会让人以为是职业培训学校,美国对那些课后去学这学那的学校多称为tutoringschool,(liketutoringschoolsforSAT,pianoschool(钢琴学校)oranyotherafterschoolprograms.我也同意你的观点,放学了就好好玩,打球,看电视,玩游戏等.开心!