高二英语短文改错Athirstbeewentoarivert-查字典问答网

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　　高二英语短文改错Athirstbeewentoarivertodrink,andwascarried（2行）awaybytherunwater.Akindbirdpickedaleaveoffatreeand(3行）threwintothewaterinfrontofthebee.thebeewasabletoclimb(4)ontotheleaf,andbrough

　　高二英语短文改错

　　Athirstbeewentoarivertodrink,andwascarried（2行）awaybytherunwater.Akindbirdpickedaleaveoffatreeand(3行）threwintothewaterinfrontofthebee.thebeewasabletoclimb(4)ontotheleaf,andbroughtsafelytotheland.thebeethankedthe(5)birdforitskindnessandthenflewaway.notlongafter,thebirdwas(6)sittingonabranchwhileamanbegantoaimhisgunatit.but(7)thebeesawthatthemanwasdoing.soitflewintotheman'seye(8)andhurthim.thepainwassogreatthathewasnotabletoshootat(9)thebird,andthebirdflewaway.intheaway.thebeewhoselifehad(10)beensavedbythebird,andwasabletosavelifeofthebird.

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2019-05-18 16:52

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　　更正在括号处标明,总共九处错误!

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　　A(thirst改成thirsty)beewentoarivertodrink,andwascarriedawaybythe(run改成running)water.Akindbirdpickedaleaveoffatreeandthrew(加入it)intothewaterinfrontofthebee.Thebeewasabletoclimbontotheleaf,andbroughtsafelytotheland.Thebeethankedthebirdforitskindnessandthenflewaway.Notlong(在after后面加入that或把after改成later),thebirdwassittingonabranch(while改成when)amanbegantoaimhisgunatit,butthebeesaw(that改成what)themanwasdoing.Soitflewintotheman'seyeandhurthim.Thepainwassogreatthathewasnotabletoshoot(去掉at)thebird,andthebirdflewaway.intheaway.Thebeewhoselifehadbeensavedbythebird,(去掉and)wasabletosave(加入the)lifeofthebird.

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2019-05-18 16:55:11

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