请大家帮我修改一下这篇英语作文(初三水平)AnUnforgettableHelpI'llfinishmystudyinjuniormiddleschoolsoon.【(接下来是我写的)ButeverytimewhenIthinkofagirl,myheartwillfilledwithpleasure①OnceItook
请大家帮我修改一下这篇英语作文(初三水平)
AnUnforgettableHelp
I'llfinishmystudyinjuniormiddleschoolsoon.【(接下来是我写的)ButeverytimewhenIthinkofagirl,myheartwillfilledwithpleasure①
OnceItookaChineseexam.Unluckily,Ifailedit.It'smyfirsttimetofailaexam,soIwasveryguiltyandworried.AndIwasinabadmoodwhileIwasinclass③.Suddenly,somebody②cametome,sheaskedmewhyIwassounhappy.Itoldher.Thenshesaid:"Comeongirl!Therearestillsomethingelseyoudidverywell!LookatthegreatresultsinyourEnglishandMath!"shetalkedtomeforalongtime,thenIfeltbetter.⑥】
(接下来是作文给出的已有句子)Thanksforyourhelp,mybestfriend.Iwillneverforgetourfriendship!
问题
①(需要复数吗).
②(用someone可以吗?感觉不顺口)
③是不是有点啰嗦(麻烦修改)
⑥觉得这句怪怪的
2.修改一些错误(包括拼写)
3.最后的句子衔接的突兀,但【】里的内容有字数限制(60~80词..我已经超到100词了..),写一下你的修改?~
请在初中水平里修改.谢谢!O(∩_∩)O