DearMomandDadEnteringSeniorThreeIreallyhopetohaveaheart-to-hearttalkwithyou!DuringtheyearsIalwaysfeelgratefulforyourunselfishcareandlove.ThankstoyourconstantencouragementIhavebeenmakingremarkableprogressinmystudy.SinceitwillbelessthanonemonthbeforetheexamI'mundergreatpressurenow.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucanhaveafrequenttalkwithmeandprovidemewithtimelyhelpwhichcontributestomystayinginagoodstate.IamfullyawareoftheresponsibilitiesIamshouldering.IhavemadeupmymindtomakeeveryefforttostudyforIbelievehardworkisthekeytosuccess.Justasthesayinggoes"nopainsnogains."MeanwhileIwillsparesometimetoparticipateinsportsactivitiesaimingtobuildupmybodyandfreemyselffromtheheavyloadofstudies.MomandDadIamquiteconfidentaboutmyfuture.Wishyougoodhealthandahappylife.YourssincerelyLiHua

　　本文的属于提纲类写作，要求对父母说说心里话，话题切合考生实际，与考生的生活非常贴近，考生有话可说，有很强的可写性。要点是以提纲的形式给出的，要求考生有较强的整合能力，在写作时充分利用连接词，高级句型和词汇，如果可能在文章结尾运用谚语，以使文章的层次更高。应该用合适的连接词，可以适当使用高级的句式和高级的词汇来给文章增色。

　　【亮点说明】范文使用了很多词组：Thanksto多亏，makingremarkableprogress取得很大的进步，madeupmymindto决定，makeeveryefforttostudy努力学习，thekeyto…的关键。还使用了不少精典句式，如：SinceitwillbelessthanonemonthbeforetheexamI'mundergreatpressurenow.这句话使用了固定句型，Iwouldappreciateitifyoucanhaveafrequenttalkwithmeandprovidemewithtimelyhelpwhichcontributestomystayinginagoodstate.这句话使用了it做形式宾语和which引导的定语从句，IamfullyawareoftheresponsibilitiesIamshouldering.这句话使用了定语从句，MeanwhileIwillsparesometimetoparticipateinsportsactivitiesaimingtobuildupmybodyandfreemyselffromtheheavyworkofstudies这句话使用了现在分词做状语。文章还恰当地使用了俗语：Justasthesayinggoes"nopainsnogains."。

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