DearMrWang
I’mveryhappytowritetoyoutalkingaboutmyEnglishstudy.AsweknowEnglishisthemostwidelyusedlanguageintheworldandhavingagoodcommandofitdoesgoodto/isquitebeneficialtoourfuturedevelopment.Thereforeit’sessentialtolearnEnglishwell.
HoweverI’mnotverygoodatEnglish.AlthoughIspeakfluentEnglishIhavedifficultyinwritingEnglishcompositions.InadditionIoftenmakegrammaticalmistakesbecauseI’mconfusedbyEnglishgrammarwhichmakesmealittleworriedsincethecollegeentranceexamisaroundthecorner.
InordertodowellinthecomingentranceexamIsuggestthatyouexplainthegrammarwhichisrelatedtotheexamsystematicallyandmakesurewemasterit.BesidesyoucanrequireustotranslateseveralsentenceseverydaywhicharehelpfultoourEnglishwriting.
Ifirmlybelievewithourjointeffortswe’llachievesuccessinEnglisheventually!
Thankyou!
Yourssincerely
LiHua
分析:
本题是一篇书信文体的写作,题意和要点简单,考生应不难理解写作要求和写作目的,考生重点要先仔细审题,审题主要包括以下几个方面:(1)主体时态;(2)主体人称;(3)内容要点。尤其是对于内容要点的把握要准确到位。再者考生需注意尽可能使句子表达形式的多样,尽量使用一些较复杂的句式结构和较高级的词汇,以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。
对于应用文中书信类问题,写作要简洁明了,直入主题。对于提纲作文写作要领,要遵循六部原则。第一步:审题;第二步:抓中心,列要点,列出写作提纲;第三步:选词组句;第四步:连句成篇;第五步:复查纠错;第六步:书写规范,卷面整洁。
亮点说明:
例文中首先就陈述自己为英语学习的认识,运用连词as引导从句,动名词短语如havingagoodcommandof作主语。文章中运用定语从句如I’mconfusedbyEnglishgrammarwhichmakesmealittleworried,名词性从句Isuggestthatyouexplainthegrammar,非谓语动词withourjointeffortswe’llachieve等高级语法结构。全文行文简洁流畅。
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