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  请问这篇高三英语短文大概能得多少分?谢谢(20分)假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”,请你根据下表所提示的信息,用英语写一篇发言稿,简单介绍自己英语学习的情

  请问这篇高三英语短文大概能得多少分?谢谢(20分)

  假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”,请你根据下表所提示的信息,用英语写一篇发言稿,简单介绍自己英语学习的情况,并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。

  自己英语学习的情况

  1.英语学习的目的

  2.英语学习的方法

  3.课外自学的途径

  4对学校英语教学的建议

  (请考生根据自己的经历与感想,提出两至三点建议)

  注意:

  1.对所给要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。

  2.词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计人总词数。

  3.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

  Dearteacherandschoolmates,1t’sagreatpleasureformetobetodayandsharemyexperienceoflearningEnglishwithyou【开头已给出】

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  ithinkthatitisimportant*forwetolearnEnglish。

  thereasonwhyilearnEnglishis(that)ihopethaticouldtalkwithpeopleintheworldwell。

  ithinkthemethodhowtolearnEnglishis(that)wemustdevelopourinterstonit。next,wemustbehardlearning*,itishardlearning*thatwecouldprogressourEnglishwell。

  themethodhowwecanlearnEnglishwhenwearen'tintheschoolisthatweshouldlearnitbyInternet,becausetherearealotofgoodEnglishtextonInternet,whichincludes*hearing,writingandspeaking&。

  isuggestthatschoolshoulddeveloptheirstudentsspeakingwitheachotherinEnglishthantolearnalone。bydiscussing,studentscanobviouslyprogresstheirabilityofEnglishwell。

  thelastofonemysuggestionisthatithinkthatitisnecessarythatourteachershouldfocusmoretheirattentiononwhethertheirstudentshavedevelopedtheirabilityofEnglishspeakingwellthantodeveloptheirabilityofEnglishwriting

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  Thankyouforlistening.【结尾已给出】

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2019-05-20 14:35
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曹路

  严格来说,要是20分满的话,能得8-10分,实际或许能多得1-2分。

2019-05-20 14:37:41
刘素一

  最多十五分。因为句子里有很多错误。thejn颍澹幔螅铮睢。椋蟆。ǎ簦瑁幔簦椋簟。椋蟆。簦瑁濉。ǎ簦瑁澹幔猓澹簦簦澹颉。帷。ǎ崛サ簦鳎幔。鳎濉。悖幔睢?517 building(build) our society relationevery family should listen to their children (to know)what they need which can remove misunderstand★f(between) each other,the teachers could listen to their students (to know)what trouble they meet62giving(give) them some helpi think it is necessary for we(we-us) to listen to each otherhow to listen to each other well is that listener(listeners) should focus their all (their all- all their)attention on listening to each other

2019-05-20 14:39:39
李连友

  ithinkthatitisimportant*forustolearnEnglish.

  themethodhowwecanlearnEnglishwhenwearen'tintheschoolisweshouldlearnitbyInternet,becausetherearealotofgoodEnglishtextsonInternet.

  isuggestthatschoolsshoulddeveloptheirstudentsonspeakingwitheachotherinEnglishthanlearningalone.

  大方向不错,但语法方面有小错误,会影响得分的。要注意名词的单复数,时态和搭配。可能分数不会太高,尽量用简单句型,少用复杂句,容易错,尤其是考试中。

2019-05-20 14:44:27
冯春燕

  ithinkthatitisimportant*for"us"tolearnEnglish。

  thereasonwhyilearnEnglishis"that"ihopeicouldtalkwithpeople"on"theworldwell。

  ithinkthemethodhowtolearnEnglishisthatwemustdevelopour"interests"onit。next,wemustbehardlearning*,itishardlearning*thatwecouldprogressourEnglishwell。

  themethodhowwecanlearnEnglishwhenwearen'tintheschoolisthatweshouldlearnitby"the"Internet,becausetherearealotofgoodEnglish"texts"on"the"Internet,which"include"hearing,writingandspeaking。

  isuggestthatschoolshould"trytolet"theirstudentsspeakingwitheachotherinEnglish"rather"thantolearnalone。bydiscussing,studentscan"definately""improve"theirability"inspeakinginEnglish"

  "Mylastsuggestion"isthatitis"quite"necessary"for"our"teachers"tofocusmoretheirattentiononimprovingstudents'oralabilities,meanwhilebyenchancingwritingskills.

  文章总体还不错,但是有点小瑕疵,比如没注意单复数变化。我大体改了改你的文章,改动部分即引号内容,希望对你会有帮助。如果满分20分的话,我觉得你至少能拿到12分左右。如果改掉哪些瑕疵,能保持在14分左右。如果想冲击高分,我建议你要加强写作练习,就想你说的那样,从网上找英文类的文章看,建议多看看外国人自己写的文章或报道,模板在万不得已的情况下最好不要用。依我弱弱的观点来看,你似乎想用到各种句式来争取高分,但有些句式用的不是很恰当。比如thelastofmysuggestionsisthatithinkthatitisnecessarythatourteacher...这里用了2个that在读起来就显得很别扭了。所以通过多看外国人写的文章加强自己的语感。我不否认你这种从句套从句或用什么which来引导另一些高级句子,这样咱国人阅卷老师看了会喜欢,但等你出了国千万不要这么用,要不让人觉得你是在故弄玄虚或觉得你很怪。不管怎么说,写作的首要目的就是得保持文体流畅,清晰,易懂,然后在这个基础上稍作高级变动即可。祝你好运。

2019-05-20 14:48:20

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