英语作文批改,求纠错.《growingpain》Nothingissmoothsailingallthetime.x05Growingupisjustlikeakindofadventure,fullofsurprise,excitementandcoincidences.Ofcourse,wehavetomeetdangersandtroublesontheway.That'swhat

　　英语作文批改,求纠错.《growingpain》

　　Nothingissmoothsailingallthetime.

　　x05Growingupisjustlikeakindofadventure,fullofsurprise,excitementandcoincidences.Ofcourse,wehavetomeetdangersandtroublesontheway.That'swhatlifeis,abitironic.Ittakessadnesstoknowwhathappinessis,noisetoappreciatesilence,absencetovaluepresenceandpaintoexplaincomfort.

　　x05Teenagetimeisthemostlovelyageinone'swholelife.CanIuse"abottleofchocolates"todescribeit?Weneverknowwhattastethenextchocolatewillbe.Perhapsitiscoveredwithcream,butbitterinside.Nomatterhowittaste,wewillrememberit.Theexperiencebecomepartofourmemory,keptinthedeepofourheart.

　　x05Justtalkaboutthechocolates,Ibetnobodydoesn'tlikethem.Probablyitisbecausechocolatesbringuswarm,andsoft.Usually,theprocessisnotthatperfect,somemakeuspainfulandwanttogiveup.Ifyoukeepdoingit,youwillgettherepayment.

　　x05Lifewillbringyoupainallbyitself,yourresponsibilityiscreatejoy.Smilecanbethemostusefulway.Because"smilingmakesitalittleeasier."Alwayssmile,evenifyou'redyingontheinside.Youneverknowwhowillbecheeredupbyyoursmile.Itcanbethelightinthedarkroom,theshiningstaroverthequietsky.

　　x05Growingbringsuspains,butwegetstrongerandstrongerbecauseofit.

　　x05Growingmakesussad,butwebecometougherandtougherfromit.

　　x05Growingruinsourpure,butweturnsanerandsanerthroughit.

　　作文如下,有很多语法错误的样子.求批改.