求大神帮我改一下英语作文.Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,t求大神帮我改一下英语作文.Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,theenvironmentalpollutionproblemisseriousincreasingly.Neverthelessairandwaterpollutionaffecteveryo

　　求大神帮我改一下英语作文.Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,t

　　求大神帮我改一下英语作文.Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,theenvironmentalpollutionproblemisseriousincreasingly.Neverthelessairandwaterpollutionaffecteveryone.Inorderthatwecanhaveabetterlife.Citiestosurvive,businessestomakeaprofit,wemusttakeaction.firstly,environmentalpollutionisalong-termproblem.Beforetheimprovementoftheenvironment,weshouldchangeourconceptofenvironmentalprotection.Todothesethings,teachersandstudentshavetodiscussanddisseminatetheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment.secondly,cityplannerstakeenvironmentalproblemsintoconsideration.Onlyhavegoodenvironment,thedevelopmentoftheeconomyisbetter.thirdly,factoriesshouldreducepollution.Thefactoryisthemostmaincauseenvironmentalpollution.Asforthoespollutions,wemustlimitthefactoryemissionpollution.Inordertohaveabetterfuture,forthesakeofourhealth,forthesakeofwhatweseeinthemorningthesunratherthanthehaze.Startsfromme,andprotectstheenvironment.